Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted April 27, 2014 Report Share Posted April 27, 2014 During either player's turn, when this card is targeted by a card effect: you can activate this effect; this card is not affected by effects of that type of card until the End Phase. You can target 1 face-up monster your opponent controls: Your opponent takes damage equal to its Level or Rank x 200 points. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase during the turn this effect is activated. Each effect of "Rapidfire Blaster Girl" can only be activated once per turn. [spoiler=V1] This card cannot be targeted by your opponent's card effects. You can target 1 face-up monster your opponent controls: Banish that target, and if you do, your opponent takes damage equal to its Level or Rank x 200 points. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase during the turn this effect is activated. The effect of "Rapidfire Blaster Girl" can only be activated once per turn.[/spoiler] Some of you may remember this card from that Pendulum Template I made a while ago. Yes, it's the same card but the effect is modified considerably, since it's no longer a Pendulum Monster. Basically this card is a burn version of Chaos Sorcerer, except that it locks down your entire Battle Phase in exchange for it. There is also a hard OPT clause, so you can't spam 2 of these cards and burn your opponent's LP/field. It also has targeting immunity to deal with destruction and other stuff. IMG Credit: Me (though thx Yin/Suigintou for rendering that pic) I'll post a link to the picture upon request if desired. Anyway, love/hate/CnC/fix my OCG. Reps are available for good reviews/CnC. BTW guys, I've noticed that a lot of you are just posting OCG fixes in card threads and nothing related to fixing balance and the card in general. If you fix my OCG, you must also provide some degree of CnC on the card's effect. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vector Nightmare Posted April 27, 2014 Report Share Posted April 27, 2014 ...a 2400 beater with no summoning restrictions, that is immune to targeting and can get rid of problem monsters (and do some damage) all in one? You went overboard with this.I'd severely tone down the first effect, to something weaker and hopefully more original: "During either player's turn, when this card is targeted by a card effect: you can activate this effect; this card is not affected by effects of that type of card until the End Phase." This allows it to target-dodge cards and remain immune to the effects of cards from that type (monsters, spells or traps) for the turn, but doesn't give it absolute protection against targeting, which isn't really something that a card that's so easy to bring out should have, along with the Chaos Sorcerer effect. Then, change the OPT clause to "You can only activate each effect of "Rapidfire Blaster Girl" once per turn." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted April 27, 2014 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2014 A while after I posted this, I got a feeling I overdid it...A LOT. Changed the first effect to that suggestion, so it can't keep messing with targeting effects. Effect still deals burn damage, but the banishing part is taken out. Also lowered its ATK to 2200. (Probably should've kept the original effect; oh wait, bombing up to 3 S/T when it kills something and battle immunity is worse than what I did now; even with a stat cut.) Anyway, thanks for the CnC on my "overdone" card; repped. I should've slapped a Semi-Nomi condition on this card or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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