wolf theme. first time cards

[frostwolf240]

just wondering what people might think of this. i am designing a wolf themed deck. pictures are for effct only.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Next time, don't use attachments to post cards. Instead, use the IMG code from the card generator.
 
You have several OCG errors (many of them related to properly capitalizing words; and using outdated OCG), so I'll try and fix them for you using PSCT.
 
Shadow Wolf
 
This card can attack your opponent directly. If this card inflicts battle damage to your opponent by a direct attack: This card gains 1000 ATK and loses 500 DEF; also, switch this card to Defense Position. Its battle position cannot be changed until the next player's Main Phase.

 

("Mode" is for anime/manga; "Position" is used for card game. OCG fix is based on Raging Flame's most recent from BP01.)

 

Beastial Warcry

 

Beast-Type monsters are changed to Attack Position and their battle positions cannot be changed.

 

(From Final Attack Order's most recent in Dragunity Legion)

 

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OK, Shadow Wolf is pretty much a much stronger version of Raging Flame Sprite since it deals more damage. While yes, it forces itself to Defense Position when it does, it has 2500/3000 DEF which is still very high, even considering the usual monsters nowadays. Lower its DEF to 2000-2100. (Super Crashbug has 3000 DEF, yes, but it also has no ATK of its own and requires 3 specific banishes). Or if you want to keep its DEF at 3000, give it a (semi)-Nomi condition.

 

I would also halve any Battle Damage inflicted from its direct attacks once it hits a certain point. Otherwise, given enough ATK, this card can cause a lot of damage. Either that or lower the amount it gains when it makes a direct hit (500 ATK is okay; 1000 is pushing it to OP range)

 

Combined with the Spell, the forced Defense Position effect is negated. Within the Spell though, it's just a Type specific version of Final Attack.

[frostwolf240]

Ok thankyou for the advice. I will have a look at the changes you suggested.

These are the first cards i have attempted. As for the correct terminology and capitalization it has been a few years since i even had a card so i am a bit rusty. again thanks for the input.