Realistic, but OVERPOWERED effect pop culture cards! ^_^

[The Sleeping Lion]

Hey everyone! This is my first post ever, so I decided to include a card based off of my profile :). Anyway, I decided to take the characters we all know and love and create yugioh cards outta them! These cards don't have ridiculous attack or defensive points, however I decided to make them have RIDICULOUS effects. This made them extremely OVERPOWERED, but I found it fitting since, these characters in actuality are OP and just plain awesome possum  :D I was trying a new concept where I would take pop culture characters, merge them with the formatting of yugioh, yet still maintain their special traits and abilities in the form of effects! If y'all like this, let me know and I will happily make some more! :) Since they won't fit in this forum, i'll place them in the following one! just find my name and view, if theres a better way please tell me im still a noob haha

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[The Sleeping Lion]

um ya, im having problems posting my other cards!! like its saying I can only upload only 35.kb of data, anyone know the proper way to post multiple cards?? I really wanna share them >:(

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Sleeping Lion

 

There is a rule here in CC that no Divine-Beast or DIVINE monsters may be used; as they are exclusive to the God cards. (Support is okay)

Also, card is in violation of the Rule of BEWD (no monster may have a higher Level than it), ATK is unrealistic (yes, Utopia ONE has 2501 in manga but this isn't it)

 

Pikachu

 

This is essentially Swords of Revealing Light on steroids (has the 3 turn lock + forces opponents to stay in whatever battle position they're in). It also can't be negated? Yeah, this is OPed without question.

 

Spartan117

 

SS itself from Deck or hand if you have 7+ monsters in graveyard, S/T immunity and can't die in battle, negates monster effects + battle damage towards it. Also bounces itself to the Deck after 3 turns and then requires you to Tribute Summon it in subsequent turns. And you can't Tribute/discard it.

 

In terms of the 1st effect, Monster Mash / Lightsworns or any other mill deck will have a field day summoning this card (they'll fulfill the requirements). Monster negation effect deals with 101 and some other threats, but given that it can negate unlimited effects w/out cost, broken. I would cut out the SS from Deck, but either way, it's still overpowered. (Yes, you already mentioned in title)

 

 

 

You seriously need to fix your OCG; it's difficult to understand your cards' effects. As Gadj mentioned in your other thread, you need to make your cards more realistic if we're going to take your creations seriously. Yes, this is Pop Culture so I should not be throwing the RC book at you, but making OP cards even in here isn't going to make you famous; well, not in a good way, however.

[The Sleeping Lion]

Thanks Sakura!
I appreciate the feed back :) when you mean the OCG do you mean the wording of the effects or just the plain stupidity of their over powered-ness? Lol. Anyway i like making them super OP cause the possible scenarios people comment on for their use make me feel so very evil ^_^

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

When we mention OCG, that means the wording of the effects.

Using proper OCG (or attempting to do so) makes it easier for us to understand how your card is supposed to be working.

 

In terms of the Lion (and for any other cards you do), make sure you use values that exist in the actual TCG/OCG.

[The Sleeping Lion]

Ok! I was never very good with grammar ( haha go figure ) but yes I will try to work on the wording of my OCG as pointed out also by the transformer guy (forgot his name). And thanks for all the feedback!