Complete Set: Unova

[ems97]

This is my second completed set. Might be a big one because  there is about 7 cards an d usually they're 3. Editing was suggested by sakura haruno and gadjiltron. Anyway, fixed rayquaza effect. Now if any players (including the owner) activates any effects, they are negated. I also nerf the attacking your opponents directly, they only lose 1500 since rayquaza is 3000 ATK.

 

Edit: Ok looks like I used this time to fix my errors 2 months ago with the recents with new images. Almost done all I am missing is the Sword of Justice and I think Meloetta.

 

 

2 Level 8 FIRE monsters

During your Battle Phase: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; FIRE monsters gain 500 ATK, then your opponent loses 200 Life Points for each FIRE monster currently on the field.

 

 

 

2 Level 8 LIGHT monsters

During your Battle Phase: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; LIGHT monsters gain 500 ATK. When this card is destroyed (by battle or a card effect): Your opponent loses Life Points equal to half this card's ATK.

 

 

2 Level 7 monsters

During your Main Phase: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; halve the ATK/DEF of 1 monster your opponent controls. Once per turn, if your opponent activates a card effect: You can negate the activation of that effect.

 

 

"Number 643: Reshiram, the Vast White Dragon" + "Number 646: Kyurem, the Boundary Dragon"

Must first be Special Summoned by "DNA Splicer". This card's Attribute is also treated as FIRE. Once per turn, FIRE monsters gain 500 ATK and are unaffected by card effects. When this card attacks: Your opponent loses 200 Life Points for each FIRE monsters on the field.

 

 

"Number 644: Zekrom, the Deep Black Dragon" + "Number 646: Kyurem, the Boundary Dragon"

Must first be Special Summoned by "DNA Splicer". This card's Attribute is also treated as LIGHT. LIGHT monsters gain 500 ATK. Once per turn, LIGHT monsters you control are unaffected by card effects. When this card is destroyed (either by battle or a card effect): Your opponent loses 1000 Life Points.

 

 

When you have "Number 646: Kyurem, the Boundary Dragon" and "Number 643: Reshiram, the Vast White Dragon" OR "Number 644: Zekrom, the Deep Black Dragon" on your side on the field, you can Special Summon 1 "White Kyurem, the Vast White Boundary Dragon" OR "Black Kyurem, the Deep Black Boundary Dragon". If the fused monster had Xyz material and sent to the Graveyard: Inflict 100 Life Points for each Xyz Material that were sent to the Graveyard.

 

 

2 Level 6 monsters

This card is also treated as a Machine-Type monster. When this card is Summoned: You can change the Attribute of this card. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; target 1 monster your opponent controls; during the End Phase of your opponent's turn, that target loses 400 ATK, and if you do, that target cannot be used as a Fusion Material, Synchro Material OR Xyz Material. This effect lasts until your opponent's 3rd End Phase after activation. This card cannot declare an attack until the effect is resolved.

 

 

2 Level 6 WIND monsters

During either Player's turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; target 1 monster on the field; that target cannot conduct its Battle Phase.

 

 

 

3 Level 7 WIND monsters

Must first be Special Summoned with "Rank-Up-Magic Reveal Glass" targeting "Number 641: Tornadus, the Incarnate Cyclone". When this card is Special Summoned; gain 500 Life Points for each Xyz Material it have. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; WIND monsters you control gains 300 ATK until the end of your 3rd End Phase. This card cannot activate the effect until it is resolved.

 

 

 

2 Level 6 LIGHT monsters

Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; this card can attack your opponent directly, and if you do, halve the battle damage.

 

 

3 Level 7 LIGHT monsters

Must first be Special Summoned with "Rank-Up-Magic Reveal Glass" targeting "Number 642: Thundurus, the Incarnate Bolt Strike". When this card is Special Summoned; gain 400 Life Points for each LIGHT monsters you control. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; this card gains 400 ATK, and if you do, this card cannot declare an attack this turn.

 

 

 

2 Level 6 EARTH monsters

This card is also treated as a Beast-Type monster. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; EARTH monsters gain 300 ATK and cannot be destroyed by battle. This effect lasts until the 2nd End Phase after activation. This card cannot activate its effect after it is resolves.

 

 

3 Level 7 EARTH monsters

Must first be Special Summoned with "Rank-Up-Magic Reveal Glass" targeting "Number 645: Landorus, the Incarnate Abundance". This card can also be treated as a Beast-Type monster. When this card is Summoned: All monsters your opponent controls loses 600 ATK. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; this card can attack again.

 

want to see other sets:

Kanto: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/319317-complete-set-kanto/

Jhoto: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/319349-complete-set-johto/

Hoenn: http://forum.yugiohc...t-hoenn-update/

Sinnoh: Will be moved here

Kalos: http://forum.yugiohc...lete-set-kalos/

 

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Gadjiltron and I both corrected your card lores up to White Kyurem; why are you not using the fixes? Also remember to capitalize your card name/Types properly, thank you.

I will fix your OCG again, but you need to remember what was corrected and adapt it to future works.

 

That aside, guess I'll give a summation CnC on what you did so far. Comparing the singles to all the summated cards here, it appears that you did read the CnC we gave you.

 

Reshiram

2 Level 8 FIRE monsters

During your Battle Phase: Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; FIRE monsters gain 500 ATK, then your opponent loses 200 Life Points for each FIRE monster currently on the field.

 

 

 

A step up from the earlier incarnate. Though Fire Kings can still run this with High Avatar Garunix, at least you raised this card's Rank to properly match its stats.

 

Zekrom

2 Level 8 LIGHT monsters

During your Battle Phase: Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; LIGHT monsters gain 500 ATK. When this card is destroyed (by battle or a card effect): Your opponent loses Life Points equal to half this card's ATK.

 

I still need to note that Hieratics can go into this card more easily now (and especially Galaxy decks, considering they can pull out 107 or Neo Galaxy Eyes with ease). But at least you lowered the ATK boost so it doesn't come off as overpowering for its Rank, so that's a start. 

 

Kyurem

 

2 Level 7 monsters

During your Main Phase: Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; halve the ATK/DEF of 1 monster your opponent controls. Once per turn, if your opponent activates a card effect: You can negate the activation of that effect.

 

The nerf to its effect negation is nice. It still ties into its Pressure ability to some degree, but is more fair. I still need to note that since you left this generic, any/all Decks that spam Level 7s can still bring this out quickly. Adding an Attribute/Type restriction would help a bit.

 

White Kyurem

 

"Number 643: Reshiram, the Vast White Dragon" + "Number 646: Kyurem, the Boundary Dragon"

Must first be Special Summoned by "DNA Splicer". This card's Attribute is also treated as FIRE. Once per turn, FIRE monsters gain 500 ATK and are unaffected by card effects. When this card attacks: Your opponent loses 200 Life Points for each FIRE monster on the field.

Black Kyurem

 

"Number 644: Zekrom, the Deep Black Dragon" + "Number 646: Kyurem, the Boundary Dragon"

Must first be Special Summoned by "DNA Splicer". This card's Attribute is also treated as LIGHT. LIGHT Attribute monsters gain 500 ATK. Once per turn, LIGHT monsters you control are unaffected by card effects. When this card is destroyed (either by battle or a card effect): Your opponent loses 1000 Life Points.

 

The first part of both Black/White's effects make no sense. I'm assuming you meant to say Normal Summon.

 

For the ATK boosting effect, considering that it's apparently a permanent effect (and will add up over time), I would add an "until the End Phase" clause to it, so they don't keep gaining power forever. Like I mentioned on your single threads, should make the boost affect every OTHER LIGHT/FIRE monster (considering it already reaches 4400/4200 ATK, respectively by boosting, given how you had the effect worded); in conjunction with the limiting effect.

 

Effects are cookie cutter-ish, except that Black "burns" a flat 1000 LP when it dies as opposed to Kyurem-W doing it every time it attacks.

 

 

Won't say anything about DNA Splicers, since it's simply a monster specific version of Polymerization that strips menial LP amounts based on materials.

 

 

 

(If you are posting Rayquaza, please make sure you understand what Gadjiltron and I both told you about its effects and nerf it accordingly.)

[The Sleeping Lion]

Gadjiltron and Sakura sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G, lolololololol what a couple of goofballs, get a room you two lovebirds :P