First Card that I ever Created

[skyblade45]

So this is my first card, let me know what you think of it , here is the effect : You can automatically summon this card, when you have 1 dark and 1 light monster in your grave and reveal them. Then special summon this card. Once per turn you have the following effects : This card cannot be destroyed by card effects or battle and can attack your opponent directly, or this card can destroy cards up to the number of spell and trap cards you control. At the end phase of your turn, this card is banished. This card can only be used once per duel. 

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Might as well grade this card before some of the usual veterans come here and start to rip it apart.

 

• Card cannot have 2 Types; you either choose 1 or the other, OR you give it an effect treating it as the other Type if you're that adamant about keeping its dual Types.
• You cannot reveal cards in the graveyard, since they're already public knowledge to players. And even if you could do so, a spammable 5000 ATK monster w/out restrictions is extremely OPed (especially since Chaos decks can fulfill the necessary set up).
• Card has immunity to everything (battle/card effects) AND can hit for 5k damage directly? Yeah, broken.
• Destroying cards on the field equal to the amount of S/T you have? Not as bad as the other two effects, but still pushing it.
• Has NO relation to the Elemental HEROs except by name; it's only there to gain support from Stratos and whatever else HERO support exists out there.

Even if it does banish itself after the End Phase, it's essentially an "I win" card at this point. With that said, you need to make the following fixes.

• Harder summoning conditions (as I already noted, Chaos decks can/will get the necessary setup to summon this card). Also slap a Nomi clause on this.
• Lower its ATK to 3000 or something. Most, if not all, 5000 ATK monsters have extremely hard summoning conditions to bring out (and have a Nomi clause on them).
• Tone down its invulnerability to being destroyed by everything.

 

Also, do not use attachments to post your cards. Instead, open them in the generator; copy/paste the IMG code onto your post.

[Therrion]

Everything Sakura said. The card needs powered down in that the summoning needs to be actually costly and either the protection on it or the power level and ability to attack directly need to be removed.

Don't let hate, when/if it comes, get to you.

[LOYTBTCG]

 

 

• Lower its ATK to 3000 or something. Most, if not all, 5000 ATK monsters have extremely hard summoning conditions to bring out (and have a Nomi cause on them.)

    

The only 5000 atk cards i can think of is Five-headed dragon and dragon master knight. And as noted yes u need 5 dragon types and dragon master knight is blue-eyes ultimate dragon and black luster soldier or gaia charger (Don't know which.)