Number 227: Skarmory, the steel armored bird

[ems97]

This another card that is one of my team. Well the effect is more or less like sturdy I think. Image belongs to 3djuegos.com.

 

 

2 level 5 monsters

If any of your monsters is targeted by an attack: You can detach 1 Xyz Material, so all monster you control will not be destroy by battle, during the battle phase.

[Daigusto Sphreez]

Although my OCG is a little off, and Konami are inconsistent, I can give your effect a more accurate wording nonetheless:

 

'When your opponent's monster attacks a monster you control: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; that monster you control cannot be destroyed by battle during this Battle Phase.'

 

You should look up basic tips for card grammar, or when in doubt, look at cards with similiar effects to what you want to replicate and use the same wording as those. 

 

The effect itself is pretty lackluster, since your opponent will likely just dispose of this before attacking. There is a lot of removal in the game and this isn't worth 2 level 5 monsters. If you want to keep the Sturdy element in mind, I'm sure you could give the card some inbuilt protection against card effects or something. 

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

@Fraxure: The effect is an optional one, so should be "If", but otherwise, you fixed it well enough.

 

On to the card however, while battle immunity is nice, Gadjiltron and I have both reminded you that removal in form of Exciton, 101 and so on is very common. Stats are decent though, but as the above notes, there are better Rank 5 monsters for doing things that can handle the metagame.