Jarvan IV,The Exemplar

[reconm]

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[LostinStatic]

1) With a total of 10 cards, this thing can gain 2000 ATK points every two turns. I'd call it meh, but it seems a bit off.

 

2) The lore is quite flawed also. While I am no master of lore, here's a small improvement to line a base.

"Once every 2 turns, activate this effect:

When this card attacks a monster on your opponent's side of the field, this card gains ATK points equal to the amount of monster cards on the field x200."  That is the most basic I can give you. Expect experts giving more.

 

3) The Circulation field in the Card Maker isn't for numbers. It's for "First Edition" and things like that.

[Sleepy]

The boost is not too bad considering it can go above 3000 if you attack a monster and use Scapegoats or something, but that makes it hard to use anywhere. It's effect needs to be possible to use more often in my opinion.

 

I suggest that it'd be ok if it was a Level 4 with a "Once per turn" effect. It's good that you took those safety measures, but yeah, it'd be ok with that small upgrade nowadays.

 

I like the concept of it, reminds me of Exodia Necross in the anime, always getting stronger with every hit.

[newhat]

This is unplayable at Level 6. It would be rare to have more ATK than, say, Summoned Skull. It would be so-so at Level 4.

 

Is this supposed to be Martial Cadence?

[reconm]

1) With a total of 10 cards, this thing can gain 2000 ATK points every two turns. I'd call it meh, but it seems a bit off.

 

2) The lore is quite flawed also. While I am no master of lore, here's a small improvement to line a base.

"Once every 2 turns, activate this effect:

When this card attacks a monster on your opponent's side of the field, this card gains ATK points equal to the amount of monster cards on the field x200."  That is the most basic I can give you. Expect experts giving more.

 

3) The Circulation field in the Card Maker isn't for numbers. It's for "First Edition" and things like that.

I know my lore is not  good.I wrote it at midnight -_-..I was very tired.I can fix this card and ill update it soon.And i used to be good with lores but i have long time to play yugioh

[reconm]

The boost is not too bad considering it can go above 3000 if you attack a monster and use Scapegoats or something, but that makes it hard to use anywhere. It's effect needs to be possible to use more often in my opinion.

 

I suggest that it'd be ok if it was a Level 4 with a "Once per turn" effect. It's good that you took those safety measures, but yeah, it'd be ok with that small upgrade nowadays.

 

I like the concept of it, reminds me of Exodia Necross in the anime, always getting stronger with every hit.

You can play this card with cards like swords of the revealing light.This will prevent your opponent to attack and you will have effect again and again.