Extra Magic-Overlay

[BurningDemon]

Extra Magic-Overlay

 

 

You cannot Special Summon other monsters during the turn you activate this card. Reveal 1 Xyz Monster in your Extra Deck, and target a number of correct targets in your Graveyard equal to the Xyz Materials required for it's Xyz Summon +1; Xyz Summon that monster using the targets as Xyz Materials, and then, detach 2 Xyz Materials from it.

 

 

See the whole Set here: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/318349-help-for-summoning/

[newhat]

It's pretty neat but it makes cards like Evilswarm Ouroboros, and potentially two of them, with a single card, requiring only that you have 3 Level 4 monsters in your Graveyard. Its drawback is minor; you can't pull it off on your first turn, but once you can use it the Xyz Monsters will carry you without needing you to Summon anything else.

[BurningDemon]

It's pretty neat but it makes cards like Evilswarm Ouroboros, and potentially two of them, with a single card, requiring only that you have 3 Level 4 monsters in your Graveyard. Its drawback is minor; you can't pull it off on your first turn, but once you can use it the Xyz Monsters will carry you without needing you to Summon anything else.

So should I change the effect or it should stay like this?

[Sleepy]

It IS an "Advance Heraldry Art" for any Xyz of any Rank, so it's a bit too much on the generic. My suggestions are:

-You cannot Special Summon other monsters this turn (once per turn clause would become a given without needing to be mentioned here).

-Give it an extra drawback regarding the materials, like requiring +1 and immediately detaching 2 upon the Xyz Summon, or something along those lines. That way you'd need 4 Xyz Materials for an Ophion, and it'd lose 2 right away, or you'd get a regular mid-sized Xyz with only 1 material ultimately there, and therefore a single shot at their effect. Though the Battlin' Boxer Xyz would greatly enjoy that drawback, but no big deal.

 

It'd look something like this:

You cannot Special Summon other monsters during the turn you activate this card. Reveal 1 Xyz Monster in your Extra Deck, and target a number of correct targets in your Graveyard equal to the Xyz Materials required for it's Xyz Summon +1; Xyz Summon that monster using the targets as Xyz Materials, and then, detach 2 Xyz Materials from it.

 

I think the Xyz Summon effect is the main appeal, and I'm not sure if it'd actually need the Breakthrough Skill-like one at the end. I'll just leave it out of the suggestion for now.

 

 

 

 

 

Just some ideas thrown out there in case either catches your eye.

[BurningDemon]

It IS an "Advance Heraldry Art" for any Xyz of any Rank, so it's a bit too much on the generic. My suggestions are:

-You cannot Special Summon other monsters this turn (once per turn clause would become a given without needing to be mentioned here).

-Give it an extra drawback regarding the materials, like requiring +1 and immediately detaching 2 upon the Xyz Summon, or something along those lines. That way you'd need 4 Xyz Materials for an Ophion, and it'd lose 2 right away, or you'd get a regular mid-sized Xyz with only 1 material ultimately there, and therefore a single shot at their effect. Though the Battlin' Boxer Xyz would greatly enjoy that drawback, but no big deal.

 

It'd look something like this:

You cannot Special Summon other monsters during the turn you activate this card. Reveal 1 Xyz Monster in your Extra Deck, and target a number of correct targets in your Graveyard equal to the Xyz Materials required for it's Xyz Summon +1; Xyz Summon that monster using the targets as Xyz Materials, and then, detach 2 Xyz Materials from it.

 

I think the Xyz Summon effect is the main appeal, and I'm not sure if it'd actually need the Breakthrough Skill-like one at the end. I'll just leave it out of the suggestion for now.

 

 

 

 

 

Just some ideas thrown out there in case either catches your eye.

Thanks for your feedback. I like your suggestion.

[BurningDemon]

Bump