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You know, pixiv_fantasia 1girl is probably the best way to get card images. Well, for me at least. Second single, 2/4. There were about three alternative names I had while designing this: f***bringer, Hymenslayer and Tittymutilator. I went with Crestbearer, tho. What? You mean you never considered naming your card Hymenslayer? Really? There's a lot I need to learn about being human, then~

 

The topic title may make it sound like it's an alt win card, but it's not. Because alt win cards are bad. Very bad. I originally wanted it so that you can only use the effect as many times as the Xyz Materials attached to the Xyz Monsters used for it's summon. 

 

 

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[spoiler=/watch?v=atzGxypCq9k ]

 

Sacred Crestbearer, Crysallia

DARK/Spellcaster

You can also Special Summon this card from your extra deck by sending 2 Xyz Monsters whose total ranks equal 8 or more from your field to your graveyard. (This Special Summon is also treated as Synchro Summon) If you do, this card gains the following effect: Once per turn, during either player's turn: You can banish 1 card from your Graveyard to target 1 card in your opponent's Graveyard; banish that target, also place 1 card you control and 1 card your opponent controls on the top of the Deck[/spoiler]

 

Remember when I said the cards had nothing to do with each other? Well.... I might have accidentally contradicted myself. This and Wings of Justice share an alt summon condition, high ATK, low DEF and a rather powerful effect.

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I'd normally riff on this card's bonus effect not targeting, but seeing that you have to effectively give up a minimum of 4 monsters to enable that effect, I'll let it slide. Bypassing targeting and destruction immunity lets this card handle most threats/combos that many others struggle against. The beneficial cost (that can banish from either Graveyard) violates common sense, though. Would be fair if it only banished from your Graveyard, seeing that you have free choice over what to banish and you'd mostly have no qualms over banishing your S/Ts.

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How about this:

 

"Once per turn, during either player's turn: You can banish 1 card from your Graveyard to target 1 card in your opponent's Graveyard; banish that target, also place 1 card you control and 1 card your opponent controls on the top of the Deck."

 

You will then simultaneously troll both the field and Graveyard while allowing your opponent to react to it. The Graveyard part, at least.

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I'm assuming you meant to have it return 1 from both sides of the field, so the correction has that in mind. For choosing which side of the field gets returned, replace and the correction with or.

 

[spoiler=Correction]You can also Special Summon this card from your extra deck by sending 2 Xyz Monsters whose total ranks equal 8 or more from your field to your Graveyard. (This Special Summon is also treated as Synchro Summon), and if you do, this card gains the following effect:.

-Once per turn, during either player's turn: You can banish 1 card from either player's Graveyard; return 1 card from your field you control and 1 from your opponent's field card your opponent controls to the top of the deck.[/spoiler]

 

The card maker doesn't support bullet points (•) so I personally use dashes. Feel free to replace it with whatever you want.

 

Other than that, the only thing I really see is that effects don't really activate from the Extra Deck, but it's still cool. The effect is powerful since the cost is banishing a card from either grave, so I suggest making it so the effect returns a card of the controller opposite of the banished card's owner. I tried to figure out how that would be worded, but I got bored after ten seconds.

 

And while I type this, Gadjiltron fixes the last part better than I did. Oh well. Still putting this out there.

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How about this:

 

"Once per turn, during either player's turn: You can banish 1 card from your Graveyard to target 1 card in your opponent's Graveyard; banish that target, also place 1 card you control and 1 card your opponent controls on the top of the Deck."

 

You will then simultaneously troll both the field and Graveyard while allowing your opponent to react to it. The Graveyard part, at least.

Oh, that works~

 

Card's updated~ 

 
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