Fire will fill the seas, lightning will pierce the air, and the dead shall walk among the living [Single Challenge 2: 2/100]

[Ren✧]

You can discard this card; add 1 Level 10 "Lord of" monster from your Deck to your hand. If your opponent controls at least 1 face-up monster, and you control no face-up monsters: You can activate 1 of the following effects:

●Activate up to 3 Continuous Spell Cards in your Deck. Their effects are negated. Banish them during the End Phase.

●Activate up to 3 Continuous Trap Cards in your Deck. Their effects are negated. Banish them during the End Phase

●Special Summon 3 "Phantasm Tokens"(Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 1000/DEF 1000). They cannot attack, be Tributed for a Tribute Summon, or used as Materials for the Summon of a Synchro or Fusion Monster. Banish them during the End Phase.

 

 

Transcribed upon the ancient stonework is said to be a spell, known only to the envoys of ancient deities, that is able to release the monsters of old from their eternal prisons.

 

^^ Sorry for the long effect

 

Wanted to create something fun. I had quite a bit of trouble with the wording/OCG, so any help there would be greatly appreciated.

 

As always, CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is appreciated and will be +REPPED. 

 

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[Trebuchet MS]

You can discard this card; add 1 Level 10 monster from your Deck to your hand. If your opponent controls at least 1 face-up monster, and you control no face-up monsters: You can activate 1 of the following effects:

●Target and Activate up to 3 Continuous Spell Cards in your Deck. Their effects are negated. Banish them during the End Phase.

●Target and Activate up to 3 Continuous Trap Cards in your Deck. Their effects are negated. Banish them during the End Phase.

●Special Summon 3 "Phantasm Tokens"(Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0). They cannot attack, be Tributed for a Tribute Summon, or used as Materials for the Summon of a Synchro or Fusion Monster. Banish them during the End Phase.

Banish all face-up cards placed on the field by this card's effect during the End Phase of the turn this card was activated.

First things first, you can't target things in the Deck. So they're activated straightaway during resolution.

 

I understand that the Phantasm Tokens are supposed to be exclusively for Raviel's Summon, but by tacking on a blanket "cannot be Tributed" clause, this defeats the entire purpose because you need to Tribute for Raviel. Hence I've tweaked the restriction a little bit, preventing Tribute for Tribute Summons.

 

The Tokens can also be 1000/1000 to make them more in line with the Phantasm Tokens Raviel spawns and give a reason to use them after Raviel has been successfully Summoned.

 

Ultimately, very helpful support to any Deck dedicated to playing the Sacred Beasts. Or, at least 1 of them. Anything making Armityle would prefer to cheat its Summon via name-copying mechanics. The search effect helps improve consistency, but what irks me is that this card can also be used to dig up any unrelated LV10 monster. Say, Tragoedia.

[Ren✧]

First things first, you can't target things in the Deck. So they're activated straightaway during resolution.

 

I understand that the Phantasm Tokens are supposed to be exclusively for Raviel's Summon, but by tacking on a blanket "cannot be Tributed" clause, this defeats the entire purpose because you need to Tribute for Raviel. Hence I've tweaked the restriction a little bit, preventing Tribute for Tribute Summons.

 

The Tokens can also be 1000/1000 to make them more in line with the Phantasm Tokens Raviel spawns and give a reason to use them after Raviel has been successfully Summoned.

 

Ultimately, very helpful support to any Deck dedicated to playing the Sacred Beasts. Or, at least 1 of them. Anything making Armityle would prefer to cheat its Summon via name-copying mechanics. The search effect helps improve consistency, but what irks me is that this card can also be used to dig up any unrelated LV10 monster. Say, Tragoedia.

 

Thank you for the fixes, like I said, it was pretty tricky to try and convey what I wanted the card to do. 

 

In all honesty, it irked me as well, but I couldn't find a way to cleverly restrict it without saying add 1 'Uria', 'Hamon', or 'Raviel' to your hand. To do that just looked tacky to me. I really do want it just be able to search those three out, so if you have any suggestions on doing that, I am all ears. Again, thank you for the fixes on the wording. It is very much appreciated!

[Trebuchet MS]

Thank you for the fixes, like I said, it was pretty tricky to try and convey what I wanted the card to do. 

 

In all honesty, it irked me as well, but I couldn't find a way to cleverly restrict it without saying add 1 'Uria', 'Hamon', or 'Raviel' to your hand. To do that just looked tacky to me. I really do want it just be able to search those three out, so if you have any suggestions on doing that, I am all ears. Again, thank you for the fixes on the wording. It is very much appreciated!

I got it. All 3 Sacred Beasts share the "Lord of" phrase. And they're the only LV10 ones that fit into the Main Deck.

 

So, we'll have this search Level 10 "Lord of" monsters.

[Ren✧]

I got it. All 3 Sacred Beasts share the "Lord of" phrase. And they're the only LV10 ones that fit into the Extra Deck.

 

So, we'll have this search Level 10 "Lord of" monsters.

 

Genius! Many thanks!

[Trebuchet MS]

Did I say "Extra Deck"? I meant "Main Deck". Derp.

[Ren✧]

Did I say "Extra Deck"? I meant "Main Deck". Derp.

 

Didn't even notice my friend :P