First card, First attempt.

[Seanoow]

Darkrai, pretty powerful defensive abilities but requiring 3 level 8 monsters to be xyz summoned. Thinking of lowering his attack to 2400 to be more balanced. Feedback appreciated!

[ems97]

This is an OK card. But, when you are making an Xyz card you need to press enter after the requirements to perform an Xyz summon another thing is you need to add "You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card" on one of these effects , for example:
3 Level 8 monsters
When this card is Special Summoned:You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; whatever effect you put.
Also there are some Xyz cards that are specific like this example:
2 Level 5 DARK monsters
Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; DARK monsters are not affected by card effects.

Otherwise this is a good card

[Seanoow]

Thanks, I knew I was forgetting some things. Ill patch it up a bit. Might get more ideas for other cards the more I patch it.

[Seanoow]

Alright, Darkrai Mk II

Changes:

Lowered attack 2800 - 2400

Changed first ability to:

If this monster attacks an opponent's monster, you can detach 1 material from this card. This card can not be destroyed by that battle.

(Also added [Mk II] in the circulation to indicate that it is the updated card).

[ems97]

Another thing forgot to mention, don't use the attached image bcuz I believe it takes 2 or 3 image to post. If I were you when u r done making your card before you post click on your card until u see the img on the bottom of your card. Copy the whole thing then paste it when you are ready to post and to be sure, click on preview post to see if it came out.

[Seanoow]

Alright, thanks for the tips. Ill look into it.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

3 Level 8 monsters

If this card attacks an opponent's monster: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; this card is not destroyed by that battle. A monster that battles this card cannot declare an attack the next turn. While this card is in Defense Position, your opponent can only declare 1 attack per turn; also, if you control another face-up monster, this card cannot be targeted for attacks.

 

Based on what you have here, you simply detach a material, have it ram an opponent's monster (and possibly take damage, especially since 2400 ATK is around the medium-range for stuff nowadays) and lock its attack off next turn. Limiting your opponent's attacks is nice to have, in addition to blocking your opponent from killing this card while you have another monster.

 

However, even with that said, 3 Level 8s is quite steep for the amount you get out of this, especially considering this card's 2400/1650 stats are low for something of that caliber. You could've kept it at 2800 ATK and it wouldn't be pushing it. I would lower it to 2 Level 8s or something like that as well.

 

Consider this, why would you waste a 3rd Xyz Material to summon this over other viable 2-material options like 107 and so forth, which often offer better effects than simply neutering a monster from attacking if it even battles with this card. Factoring in the last effect, you do realize that any form of battle position changing cards essentially shuts down Darkrai (and while the second effect may kick in, keep in mind that you will most likely get killed by the end of the turn; unless you devote enough resources to keep this card protected.

 

 

On a secondary note, you can just edit the main post and put the new card in there instead of posting it on a new one. Also, we don't exactly like attachments: Just open your card in the generator, left-click and copy/paste the IMG code that appears below. (And post your card's effect beneath; it will help us fix your OCG if needed)