Lord_Of_Pie Posted June 29, 2014 Report Share Posted June 29, 2014 Gives The Equiped Monster 500 Extra Attack And Also Kills The Enemy Monster In The Same Columm If It's Attribute Is Earth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted June 29, 2014 Report Share Posted June 29, 2014 What I Don't Understand Is Why You Capitalize Everything Like This. its almost as bad as those who dont capitalize or use punctuations Gives The equipped monster gains 500 Extra ATK. If your opponent controls an EARTH monster in the same column as this card when this card is activated: And Also Kills The Enemy destroy that opponent's monster In The Same Columm If It's Attribute Is Earth. Not a very good card. Assuming I've interpreted your card effect right, the monster destruction effect is so pinpointed that there's almost no reason to play this card. If you want a monster destroyed without targeting, might as well use Fissure or Smashing Ground. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dramatic Crossroad Posted June 29, 2014 Report Share Posted June 29, 2014 The ART is so pretty though, too bad its on such an uninspiring card. Also, unclear of which alignment counts, does it deploy the destruction to a monster in the column of the equipped monster or the column in which this card is activated. Also, to make it more versatile and plausable, after applying Gadjiltron's grammar fix you can edit the effect even further. The equipped monster gains 500 ATK. Before damage calculation, when a non-WIND monster battles the equipped monster: if that monster is in the same column as the equipped monster; Destroy that monster. This way, it will still not be extremely useful as it is, but at least will be a bit different, little more comprehendable and realistic and at will have original effect on its own. Plus it makes a decent support for the wildly underpowered "Storm Shooter". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord_Of_Pie Posted June 29, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 29, 2014 The Reason I Have Caps Is That I Personally Think it Looks Better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordCowCowCowCowCowCowCowCow Posted June 29, 2014 Report Share Posted June 29, 2014 The Reason I Have Caps Is That I Personally Think it Looks Better. This is Realistic Cards. You need to have the proper grammar or else it'll look bad. I honestly can't review this because I have no idea what you're trying to say in the card. I could assume what the people above have commented is correct but you haven't said yes or no to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Forest Fire Posted June 30, 2014 Report Share Posted June 30, 2014 The Reason I Have Caps Is That I Personally Think it Looks Better. Within the structure of making a real card, however, every word is not capitalized. It doesn't matter that you think it makes the card look nice. If we wanted nice looking cards, they'd be full art, no word cards; but they aren't, are they? I think Dramatic gives the best lore change to this, no offense gadj. I honestly can't review this because I have no idea what you're trying to say in the card. I could assume what the people above have commented is correct but you haven't said yes or no to it. I feel the same. There's nothing really I can say about this besides what has been said and I really don't feel like being repetitive. And i think he hasn't said yes or no to the changes and suggestions made because he's just trolling. in which case we're all wasting our breath trying to impart reason. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted June 30, 2014 Report Share Posted June 30, 2014 The Reason I Have Caps Is That I Personally Think it Looks Better. Caps on everything is only befitting of titles (and card names). And even titles don't capitalize certain articles like "a", "the", "an", etc. Outside of titles, caps-everything looks painful to read, especially in a paragraph. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Just Crouton Posted June 30, 2014 Report Share Posted June 30, 2014 The +500 is weak. Restricting the target for monster destruction to the same column as a equipped monster wouldn't be as bad if it also wasn't also restricted to destroying EARTH monsters. It looks like Senets could use this, but they suck. This card is pretty bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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