youri012 Posted July 10, 2014 Report Share Posted July 10, 2014 EDITED A card i made after being offline for a very long time. There are definately some things wrong with the OCG and stuff, so please help me fix it and tell me what you think! thank you :3 EDIT: changed the Synchro card, it has base stats now and an edited effect. I hope I did this one right >.< I'll fix the Flaming Horse Rider sometime later, please take a look at these cards and help me improve them :3 Advice is welcome! Thank you very much for your help ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted July 10, 2014 Report Share Posted July 10, 2014 Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must first be Special Summoned by banishing 2 Pyro-Type monsters in your Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned: Target 1 monster your opponent controls; gain control of that target, and when you do, it is treated as a Pyro-Type monster. This is pretty much a permanent Change of Heart on a 2400 ATK body that triggers every time it gets Special Summoned and treats it as a Pyro like this card. I don't recall any Rank 7s that require Pyro-Type monsters exclusively, however. But since it's essentially a CoH on legs, I'd advise making it a Nomi monster instead and only having it target face-up monsters. That way, you can't just revive this continuously and trigger the effect. Otherwise, just scrap the effect and make something that does not act like Change of Heart, Brain Control or whatever else that's on the ban list right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
youri012 Posted July 10, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2014 Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must first be Special Summoned by banishing 2 Pyro-Type monsters in your Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned: Target 1 monster your opponent controls; gain control of that target, and when you do, it is treated as a Pyro-Type monster. This is pretty much a permanent Change of Heart on a 2400 ATK body that triggers every time it gets Special Summoned and treats it as a Pyro like this card. I don't recall any Rank 7s that require Pyro-Type monsters exclusively, however. But since it's essentially a CoH on legs, I'd advise making it a Nomi monster instead and only having it target face-up monsters. That way, you can't just revive this continuously and trigger the effect. Otherwise, just scrap the effect and make something that does not act like Change of Heart, Brain Control or whatever else that's on the ban list right now. Allright, thank you very much for the advice, I appreciate it. :) I'll take a look at it ASAP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Valkyrus Posted July 11, 2014 Report Share Posted July 11, 2014 The Synchro monster is actually not too bad. Although the ATK gain might be too little. You'd need at least 4 tuners in the Graveyard(s) for it to be at a decent ATK for a level 7, and that's more tuners than you should be having in your Graveyard at the same time. Or you should lower the ATK/DEF gain and give it some base stats. Besides, tuners don't like being in the Grave that much, aside from the obvious Plaguespreader and maybe Lightsworn Archer/ Fishborg Launcher. As it is, if you add "When this card leaves the field, you can Special Summon 1 Tuner Monster from your Graveyard", it'd make it better in my opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
youri012 Posted July 11, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2014 The Synchro monster is actually not too bad. Although the ATK gain might be too little. You'd need at least 4 tuners in the Graveyard(s) for it to be at a decent ATK for a level 7, and that's more tuners than you should be having in your Graveyard at the same time. Or you should lower the ATK/DEF gain and give it some base stats. Besides, tuners don't like being in the Grave that much, aside from the obvious Plaguespreader and maybe Lightsworn Archer/ Fishborg Launcher. As it is, if you add "When this card leaves the field, you can Special Summon 1 Tuner Monster from your Graveyard", it'd make it better in my opinion. I edited the Synchro card, thanks for the feedback! :3 EDIT: I decided to completely scrap the old effect of Flaming Horse Rider, I know these effects are kinda generic but whatever. I think it's less broken now at least.... xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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MajorMajora Posted July 13, 2014 Report Share Posted July 13, 2014 I really like these ideas. They are original and balanced, though a i feel they should've been put into singles. Oh well, they are still really cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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