HB001-Rigger Of The Moon My First Card ever!

[hectorbastida]

Hi Guys :D First of all I wanna say hi to everyone. Im new to this forum and new to "making" Yugioh cards.
I really love this TCG and this is my first card, any suggestions or feedback is welcomed :D, im an open person so dont hold back.

 

 

Rigger Of The Moon

3 Level 4 monsters
You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card, negate the activation of a Spell or Trap card and destroy it, and if you do this card gains 500 ATK. If this card has no Xyz Materials destroy it.

 

 

And here is the "anime" card version :P
http://i.imgur.com/JRBPRQ2l.jpg

 

So, what do you guys think? Have a nice day :D.

 

_{Edit: Fixed card Effect and Balance.}

^{Edit 02: Image fixed by .Buddha :D !}

^{Edit 03: Made some changes to the card and added anime card version.}

 

 

_{Note: I dont own the artwork, card was edited in powerpoint (lol)}

[newhat]

Does it negate the Spell or Trap on activation, or does it negate Continuous Spell/Trap Cards that are already active?

 

If it's the first one, it's overtuned because the drawback can be worked around with Gaia Dragon. Make the effect destroy it automatically when it runs out of Materials and I think it will be fine.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

I have the same question about it. Right now, it's implying that it takes out an already existing S/T card.

 

Did you mean for it to negate the activation of one? In this case, it simply becomes a Dark Bribe of sorts that grants a power bonus when it does.

 

Granted, it does blow itself up if you have no materials (either you burn them on two negations or something like Galaxy-Eyes, etc. takes them via effect) but as newhat mentioned, you can just use a RUM on it (or Gaia Dragon) before the Battle Phase happens. Just change it to the moment it runs out of materials, it dies.

 

As mentioned though, you need to clarify whether or not this card negates already active S/T cards or functions like Bribe. If it's the latter, add an OPT clause on it.

[newhat]

"ABC"?

 

Since your opponent can force both its Materials and blow it up by entering their own Battle Phase, the ATK gain would be pretty hard to use.

[hectorbastida]

 

Card edited :  "You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card, negate the activation of a Spell or Trap card and destroy it" and also it gets destroyed if it has no Xyz Materials,

 

my bad totally, i didnt clarify correctly the idea, its fixed now thanks for the feedback really guys! :D