Tamajakaru Posted July 16, 2014 Report Share Posted July 16, 2014 Here is a Powerful dragon who wishes for nothing more than to consume all in its dark star for all eternity standing as a truly invincible force. Revised by your words Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted July 16, 2014 Report Share Posted July 16, 2014 3 Level 8 Dragon-Type monsters While This card's effects can only be applied/resolved while it has an Xyz Material. it Cannot be destroyed by battle. This card and is unaffected by other card effects. This card can attack all of your opponents monsters your opponent controls once each. At the During each End Phase: of every turn Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card. When this card has no Xyz Materials its effect is negated. 3 specific Level 8 material is quite a hoop to jump through. So let's see what we get for such an investment - a 3500 ATK monster that... ...Because of how its original effect is worded, negates its own effects with or without Xyz Material. As I've addressed in your other cards, the inclusion of "other" allows the card to work properly under the guise of blanket card immunity. That said, it's a completely unstoppable multi-attacker for a couple of turns (it detaches even during the opponent's End Phase). Thing is said couple of turns is enough for it to lay waste to the opponent's field and almost end the game there and then. Water down its self-protection effects (like make it indestructible or untargetable, but not outright immune to anything else) and it'd be in line with other boss monsters. Else, it's an unstoppable walking ball of hax. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dramatic Crossroad Posted July 16, 2014 Report Share Posted July 16, 2014 If you were to make an overpowered space-themed Berserk + Harpie Phantasmal Dragon combo that lacks overall creativity - this would be it. It's not that i don't like it, it's just that i seem to care. If you actually took some time to think it though - it could turn into a splendid card, or not - at least you should try. Please don't name your topics like that, it shows you just spam cards for post/topic count... we share our creations so we can hear valid oppinions/criticism and hopefully make better cards, and be better ourselves. If you wanted a fade-out power effect, here's a suggestion i can give you: During each of your End Phases; detach 1 Xyz Material from ths card.Apply these effects, according to the number of Xyz Materials attached to this card: ● 1 or more: This card cannot be destroyed by battle. This card can attack all monster your opponent controls once each. ● 2 or more: This card cannot be targeted by other card effects. ● 3 or more: This card is unaffected by card effects that do not designate a target. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted July 17, 2014 Report Share Posted July 17, 2014 Final effect, once again, effectively nullifies the rest of the effects on this card, because the card becomes immune to all non-targeting effects including its own, and those effects in question don't target. We've been through this at least 3 times. Please remember "other" or "except its own" or something among those lines when you're trying to apply effect immunity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted July 17, 2014 Report Share Posted July 17, 2014 You should probably edit the name of the card onto the title, by the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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