Dragonic Overlords (My version)

[omersonic]

Here are some cards that are based off Dragonic overlord from vanguard. What do you think?

 

2 Level 8 Dragon-Type Monsters

If this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate cards or effects until the end of the Damage Step. Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target 1 monster your opponent controls; destroy that target and if you do, inflict 500 damage to your opponent.

 

 

3 Level 8 Dragon-Type Monsters

You can also Xyz Summon this card by using a "Dragonic Overlord" you control as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.)

If this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate cards or effects until the end of the Damage Step. Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target 2 cards your opponent controls; destroy those targets and if you do, inflict 1000 damage to your opponent.

 

 

3 Level 9 Dragon-Type Monsters

If this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate cards or effects until the end of the Damage Step. If this card has a "Dragonic Overlord" monster as an Xyz Material, it gains this effect:

Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target 1 card your opponent controls; banish it and if that card was a monster, this card gains ATK equal to the ATK of the banished monster.

 

 

3 Level 10 Dragon-Type Monsters

You can also Xyz Summon this card by using a Rank 8 or higher Dragon-Type Xyz Monster you control as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) If this card attacks, your opponent cannot activate cards or effects until the end of the Damage Step. When this card attacks, target 1 card on the field; destroy that target. Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; this card can attack up to the number of Dragon-Type monsters you control this turn and also, if this card attacks a Defense Position monster, it deals Piercing Battle Damage to your opponent.

 

 

2 Level 10 Dragon-Type Monsters

(This card is always treated as a "Dragonic Overlord" card.)

You can also Xyz Summon this card by using a Rank 8 or higher Dragon-Type Xyz Monster you control as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) This card is unaffected by Trap Cards. Once per turn, during either player's turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target 1 card on the field; banish that target, then inflict 800 damage to your opponent.

 

 

Target 2 or more Dragon-Type monsters you control and declare 1 Level from 8-10; the targeted card's Levels become the declared Level until the End Phase. You cannot Special Summon monsters this turn, except Dragon-Type monsters.

 

 

Activate only if you control 2 or more "Dragonic Overlord" Xyz Monsters. Target 1 Xyz Monster you control; it gains ATK equal to the total ATK of all other "Dragonic Overlord" monsters you control. Also, it cannot be targeted or destroyed by card effects, and if it attacks a Defense Position monster; inflict Piercing Battle Damage to your opponent. Monsters other than the targeted monster cannot attack. These changes last until the End Phase.

 

 

Target 1 Xyz Monster you control; Special Summon, from your Extra Deck, 1 Dragon-Type Xyz Monster with the same Attribute but 1 Rank higher than the targeted monster, using that monster as an Xyz Material. This Special Summon is treated as an Xyz Summon. (Xyz Materials attached to that card become Xyz Materials attached to the new monster). Then draw 1 card, and if it's a Dragon-Type monster, reveal it and destroy 1 card on the field. 

 

[ems97]

I think these dragons look amazing and the effects well need a minor fixes but I'm not good with correcting but I will try my best to help out.

 

 

Dragonic Overlord

2 Level 8 Dragon-Type monsters

When this card attacks: Your opponent cannot activate cards or effects until the end of the Damage Step. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; target 1 monster your opponent controls; destroy that target, and if you do, inflict 500 damage to your opponent.

 

Dragonic Overlord - The End

3 Level 8 Dragon-Type monsters

You can also Xyz Summon this card by using a "Dragonic Overlord" as the Xyz Material. When this card attacks: Your opponent cannot activate cards or effects until the end of the Damage Step. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; target 2 cards your opponent controls; destroy those targets, and if you do, inflict 1000 damage to your opponent.

 

Dragonic Overlord - The Re-Birth

3 Level 9 Dragon-Type monsters

When this card attacks: Your opponent cannot activate cards or effect until the end of the Damage Step. If this card has a "Dragonic Overlord" monster as an Xyz Material, it gains this effect.

. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; target 1 card your opponent controls from their hand; banish that target, and if that card was monster; this card gains ATK equal to the monster that was banished by this effect.

 

Dragonic Overlord - Vermilion Caeser

3 Level 10 Dragon-Type monsters

You can also Xyz Summon this card by using a Rank 8 or higher Dragon-Type you control as the Xyz Material. When this card attacks: Your opponent cannot activate cards or effects until the end of the Damage Step. When this card attacks: target 1 card on the field; destroy that target. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; this card can attack up to the number of Dragon-Type monsters you control this turn. When this card attacks a Defense Position monster; inflict piercing damage to your opponent.

 

Phantom Blaster Overlord

2 Level 10 Dragon-Type monsters

This card is also treated as a "Dragonic Overlord" monster. You can also Xyz Summon this card by using a Rank 8 or higher Dragon-Type Xyz monster you control as  the Xyz Material. This card is not affected by Trap Cards. During either player's turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; target 1 card on the field; banish that target, and if you do, inflict 800 damage to your opponent.

 

Overlord Preperations

Target 2 or more Dragon-Type monsters you control; declare a Level from 8 to 10; those targets becomes that Level until the End Phase. You cannot Special Summon monsters this turn except Dragon-Type monsters.

 

Overlord Ultimate Formation

Activate this card only when you control 2 or more "Dragonic Overlord" Xyz monsters. Target 1 Xyz monster you control; it gains ATK equal of all "Dragonic Overlord" monsters you control and cannot be targeted or destroyed by card effects. When that target attacks a Defense Position monster; inflict piercing damage to your opponent. Monsters that are not targeted by this effect cannot declare their Battle Phase until the End Phase.

 

Rank-Up-Magic Dragonic's Force

Target 1 Xyz monster you control; Special Summon from your Extra Deck 1 Dragon-Type Xyz monster with the same Attribute, but 1 Rank higher, by using it as an Xyz Material. (This Special Summon is treated as an Xyz Summon. Xyz Materials attached to it also become Xyz Materials on the Summoned monster.) Draw 1 card, then, if  then, if that monster you drew is a Dragon-Type monster; reveal it, and if you do, target and destroy 1 card on the field.

 

The only other thing is to balance out the effect and the second card try to come up with another effect. Over all these are some great cards

[dye2556]

Dragonic Overlord's signature skill is continuous attack not destroy the card. And Dragon Kaiser Vermillion's signature skill is attack multiple targets.

[lucarionite69]

I really like these cards! if only they were real :/

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Dragonic Overlord's signature skill is continuous attack not destroy the card. And Dragon Kaiser Vermillion's signature skill is attack multiple targets.

I really like these cards! if only they were real :/

 

Both of you, please offer more constructive comments for the TC's cards.

Same thing with ems; the OCG fixes are fine, but elaborate a bit more on what you believe should be changed.

 

Thanks.