Taker of Limbs

[Forest Fire]

I thought the name and effect fit the picture. He takes the limbs of the monsters you banish to summon him and use them to make himself more powerful. He can also protect himself, if you give him a limb. Metaphors are awesome.

Lore: This card is always treated as Zombie-Type. This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. This card must be Tribute Summoned by Banishing a number of Zombie-Type or Fiend-Type monsters from your Graveyard (max. 3); this card gains 1000 ATK/DEF points for each monster Banished this way. If this card would be sent to the Graveyard by any means, you may pay Life Points equal to it's ATK; and if you do: This card is changed to face-down Defense Position. 

FLIP: Destroy a target monster whose ATK is less than this card's ATK.    (not sure if the last two lines contradict the second)

[Forest Fire]

bump because comments are wanted. 

[Mdoraz]

Wouldn't its attack go back to 0 when its flipped face down...? Making the second effect useless?

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

This card is always treated as Zombie-Type. Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must be Special Summoned by banishing Zombie-Type or Fiend-Type monsters from your Graveyard (max. 3) and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. This card gains 1000 ATK/DEF for each monster banished to Special Summon this card. If this card would be sent to the Graveyard: You can pay Life Points equal to its ATK; change this card to face-down Defense Position. 
 
FLIP: Destroy a target monster whose ATK is less than this card's ATK.

 
This card's stat gaining effect is the same as stuff as Chimeratech Overdragon, Megarock Dragon and/or other monsters whose ATK/DEF are predetermined when you summon them. By flipping it face-down, you are essentially resetting the boosts; making this card useless in its Flip Effect. As for some of the summoning condition things, you confused Normal Summoning/Special Summoning [as you do not banish monsters in the graveyard to Normal Summon a monster]. You also had it say Special Summon/Set, latter would make the 3rd effect moot b/c it can't be set face-down.

 

If you want to fix it, just have it gain points for every Fiend/Zombie that you've banished thus far; not just by the effect. Wording it with your original intent will still reset it to zero and effectively neuter its Flip effect.

[Forest Fire]

 
This card's stat gaining effect is the same as stuff as Chimeratech Overdragon, Megarock Dragon and/or other monsters whose ATK/DEF are predetermined when you summon them. By flipping it face-down, you are essentially resetting the boosts; making this card useless in its Flip Effect. As for some of the summoning condition things, you confused Normal Summoning/Special Summoning [as you do not banish monsters in the graveyard to Normal Summon a monster]. You also had it say Special Summon/Set, latter would make the 3rd effect moot b/c it can't be set face-down.

 

If you want to fix it, just have it gain points for every Fiend/Zombie that you've banished thus far; not just by the effect. Wording it with your original intent will still reset it to zero and effectively neuter its Flip effect.

yeah i wasn't sure about the whole set thing. and you can't banish monsters from your grave for tribute summons? ok. 

so this would be better? "This card is always treated as Zombie-Type. This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set, except by it's own effect. This card must be Tribute Summoned by Banishing a number of Zombie-Type or Fiend-Type monsters from your Graveyard (max. 3); this card gains 1000 ATK/DEF points for each Zombie-Type and Fiend-Type monster that has been Banished. If this card would be sent to the Graveyard by any means, you may pay Life Points equal to it's ATK; and if you do: This card is changed to face-down Defense Position.

FLIP: Destroy a target monster whose ATK is less than this card's ATK."

[Forest Fire]

Bump. 

[Forest Fire]

Bump