Spinny Posted August 20, 2014 Report Share Posted August 20, 2014 http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Anubis%2CDweller+Of+The+Dead&cardtype=Xyz&subtype=effect&attribute=Earth&level=5&rarity=Common&picture=http%3A%2F%2Fimages.yugiohcardmaker.net%2F733057%2F548571479.jpg&circulation=F.D.D&set1=F.D.D&set2=001&inset=on&type=Beast&carddescription=2+level+5+Dark+monsters%0D%0AOnce+per+turn+you+can+detach+one+xyz+material+from+this+card+to+target+1+monster+on+the+field+and+send+it+to+the+graveyard+and+if+you+do+gain+life+equal+to+its+ATK+or+DEF.+When+This+card+Is+Summoned+or+leaves+the+field+add+1+of+your+Face-down+banished+card+to+your+hand.%0D%0AYou+can+look+at+your+Face-down+banished+cards.+&atk=2400&def=1600&creator=KINGOFOBLIVION&year=2014&serial=79165049 Lore: 2 level 5 Dark monsters Once per turn you can detach one xyz material from this card to target 1 monster on the field and send it to the graveyard and if you do gain life equal to its ATK or DEF, this card cannot attack the turn you use this effect. When This card Is Summoned or leaves the field add 1 of your Face-down banished card to your hand. You can look at your Face-down banished cards. I'm currently making support/ more cards for the whole banished Facedown cards thing. I'm pretty sure hes probably overpowered but im not sure on how to reduce or restrict him. Please Discuss ^^ Your Insight Shall Provide Light! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dramatic Crossroad Posted August 21, 2014 Report Share Posted August 21, 2014 I can help you with the OCG, and share a little opinnion on balance etc. 2 Level 5 DARK monsters Once per turn: You can detach one Xyz Material from this card and target 1 monster on the field; send the target to the Graveyard and if you do, gain LP equal to its ATK or DEF. This card cannot attack the turn you activate this effect. When this card is Summoned or leaves the field; add 1 of your face-down banished cards to your hand. You can look at your face-down banished cards. (Changes are highlighted with bold+italic.) The last sentense of the effects is questionably usefull, since it would only do you any good once you actually summon this card and trigger the other effects, and you have to have f/d banished set up to use it. I think the 1st effect is balanced, you can keep it this way, or edit it a bit, so it would work with the 2nd - "Summon/Leave Field effect". Since there aren't any actual cards i can recall that banish things face-down i don't think the effect is of any use right now. Here is a my suggestion: 2 Level 5 DARK monsters Once per turn: You can banish face-down 1 Xyz Material from this card and target 1 monster on the field; send the target to the Graveyard and if you do, gain LP equal to its ATK or DEF. This card cannot attack the turn you activate this effect. When this Xyz Summoned card leaves the field; add 1 of your face-down banished card to your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spinny Posted August 21, 2014 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2014 Thank you I will make the changes when I get back home its too difficult to do on the tablet :) Also I shall post more of the cards on Monday probably but in the meanwhile I would like to know whether this card would get much play since its 2nd EFF being completely useless right now with no support. However I think this balances out the first EFF ATM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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