Boss of the Abyss

[Raviel the Phantom]

Special Summon this card by removing 2 WATER monsters from your Graveyard. Once per turn select 1 Set card on the field, destroy that target. Your opponent cannot activate the target in response to this effect. This card cannot attack the turn this effect is used.

[Spinny]

Hi byakuran.

I think this would get banned just because of what it is...

Mermails would abuse this just like they abuse tidal but this card is a 2500 beater PLUS backrow removal??

It seems to good.

Atleast put a "You cant activate this effect the turn this card is summoned".

instead of the your opponent cant activate things in response stuff (since nowadays u will pop something they cant generally activate anyway i.e breakthrough,solemn,bottomless,wiretap,mirror force, fiendish etc) give it an effect which will combine with the abyss setup more, i.e when this card leaves the field add 1 of your banished WATER monsters to your hand?(im not sure if that would help its opness situation but its an idea.).

Hope i was of use!!

[Fat Cat Ultim]

 

Special Summon this card by removing 2 WATER monsters from your Graveyard. Once per turn select 1 Set card on the field, destroy that target. Your opponent cannot activate the target in response to this effect. This card cannot attack the turn this effect is used.

First ; I don't understand this effect : "Once per turn select 1 Set card on the field, destroy that target. Your opponent cannot activate the target in response to this effect. "If you target one set card on the field,you destroy it,after destroying it you negate it's effects ?! you need to choose between destroying it and negating it.They don't go both,and I have another re-write :

 

"Once per turn select 1 Set card on the field, destroy that target. Your opponent cannot activate any effects to negate this effect.This card cannot attack the turn this effect is used."

 

Second ; I think "removing" isn't an appropriate term for Yugioh.I think you should change that with "Banish"

 

That's all.Feel free to correct any mistakes I made.

[The15thWing]

Super-Generic Water Backrow killer with 2.5k and can be used for Rank 6?

NOPENopenopenope

 

Yeah. Either up the Summon Cost, lower the stats, or make it so it's effect can't be used during the turn it's Summoned.

 

 

 

First ; I don't understand this effect : "Once per turn select 1 Set card on the field, destroy that target. Your opponent cannot activate the target in response to this effect. "If you target one set card on the field,you destroy it,after destroying it you negate it's effects ?! you need to choose between destroying it and negating it.

 

The effect works, because if you chose to destroy a Trap Card, such as Compulsory Evacuation Device, and they would use it, making it so they cannot respond to the effect means they can't activate Compulsory before it gets destroyed.

[Fat Cat Ultim]

@The15thWing : Ah ok.Sorry I didn't understand lol.

[BatMed]

A powerful effect without an "effective" Draw Back, what a mess !! (go to the FTCG ban list ><) 

 

Anyway, the card's concept is fair, it has been a ling time since I saw a generic WATER monster that can make from Mermails and Atlanteans an abuse for your opponents play. Here is what I suggest:

 

ATK:2400 / DEF: 1600

 

Special Summon this card by removing 2 WATER monsters from your Graveyard. You cannot activate this card's effect during the turn it is summoned. Once per turn, you can banish 1 WATER monster from your Graveyard, then target 1 Set card on the field; destroy that target, regardless; Change this card's to face-up Defense Position (Your opponent cannot activate the target in response to this effect).