My First Synchro - Rylarth The Dark One

[Fat Cat Ultim]

Hello ! :3

 

Here's my first Synchro card.It may have some flaws or be tad OP.Correct that if you can.

 

LORE :

1 Tuner + 1 DARK Level 5 Monster
 This card's Synchro Summon cannot be negated.  During the turn this card was Synchro Summoned, it cannot be targeted by card effects.  Once per turn: You can Banish 2 cards from your Graveyard; draw 2 cards.  If this card would be sent to the Graveyard, Banish it instead.

 

Edits : Changed the card grammar.

[LeLukeX]

 This card's Synchro Summon cannot be negated.  During the turn this card was Synchro Summoned, it cannot be targeted by card effects.  Once per turn: You can Banish 2 cards from your Graveyard; draw 2 cards.  If this card would be sent to the Graveyard, Banish it instead.

 

Wonderful effect, very powerful.  You made it very difficult to get out due to the (Level 5 DARK monster).  Had it only been Level 5 or only DARK it would have been broken due to the Pot of Greed effect.  Need a level 5 Tuner and a Level 5 DARK monster, very interesting restrictions, great card!  

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

The last time we had a Synchro monster with a specific Level requirement and a specific 2 material was this one.

 

While its 39/21 body coupled with its guaranteed summoning and effect immunity on the turn you play it, the materials themselves aren't going to prove easy to pull off from what I remember (at least without consistency issues); so in a way, it counterbalances its relatively high stats for a Level 10.

 

The banishing = draw effect could see some abuse with Eclipse Wyvern or something in Chaos Dragons, but I don't think they can make room for this.

 

Otherwise, it looks fine.

 

(BTW, banish should be lowercased; that's the only other fix to OCG that needs to be pointed out)