Legendary Cards (A new genartion in power)

[Exsodia12]

Look I don't know what im doing im new so I probably wont do good. anyways I call these cards Egyption Gaurdians I have made 3 so far

Each one has a rank (Not there level) Alghtough there level is the same they have a rank in the circulation (E.g Eyption Gaurdian rank 3) They have a rank from 1-6 (Note: In there circulation if it says just says Epyption gaurdian, it's a rank 1) 6's are beyond powerfull and as a special rule both players must agree that card can be used if not it can not be used (Note: This rule only apllies to Rank 6 not any other rank)

The first one is called Galexy red/blue eyes black and white dragon its a fusion card (Also note that there picture says coominig soon never sorry I coulden't find a good enuogh pic)

The second one is clawestria a Xyz card like the winged dragon of ra but you only sacrifice two monsters (Because its an Xyz card)

The third one is my strondest made I dare not speak its name its the only card I made thats not rank 1. This rank 5 Eygiption gaurdian card might have strong power but its weakness is too easy it has 4 weaknesses Spellcasters, Traps, spells and its own abilaty when your opponent has no monsters on the field (Hint* it stops you from attacking)

Now I don't know if this will work but look at the attchments

 

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

If you've read the RC Rules properly, you'd know that the first card essentially violates one of the rules Konami made for cards (and that's the max of 5000 original ATK/DEF).

There's also the issue with it being dual-Typed; either choose one of them and have it treated as the other one concurrently by adding this effect "This card is also treated as a [X]-Type monster"; X being the other Type that you chose not to print.

 

Clawestria violates the Xyz mechanic (well, it's missing its required materials, which apparently are 2 Level 12 monsters). You do not tribute monsters to summon an Xyz Monster (they are "overlaid"); it would help if you've done your research on Xyz Monsters. In any case, there is no consistent way this card will be summoned; outside of Level-altering tactics such as Galaxy Queen's Light, Tannhauser Gate and so forth.

 

I won't say much about the last one.

 

In terms of the first two, they're essentially stat boosters. Considering that cards like Number 101, Exciton, Judgment Dragon, Black Rose Dragon, Mirror Force or for that matter, card removal are very common; these two cards won't be very useful. They'd make decent beatsticks, yes, but that doesn't mean much in an era focused around effect removal.

 

In any case, you seriously need to work on your grammar and spelling issues (as there are several of them). Zaziuma has kindly written us all a guide to writing card grammar properly, so we can understand. The first two are clear, yes, last one, not so much. I would highly advise you read that, along with the guides that Toyo and .Saber have written for the section.

 

I'm not trying to say that your cards are bad, but you do have a lot of work ahead of you to fix things.

 

(And also, this is for Single cards; you have three cards in this thread. In any case though, this doesn't belong in RC; so moving this to the Experimental section.)

[Exsodia12]

If you've read the RC Rules properly, you'd know that the first card essentially violates one of the rules Konami made for cards (and that's the max of 5000 original ATK/DEF).

There's also the issue with it being dual-Typed; either choose one of them and have it treated as the other one concurrently by adding this effect "This card is also treated as a [X]-Type monster"; X being the other Type that you chose not to print.

 

Clawestria violates the Xyz mechanic (well, it's missing its required materials, which apparently are 2 Level 12 monsters). You do not tribute monsters to summon an Xyz Monster (they are "overlaid"); it would help if you've done your research on Xyz Monsters. In any case, there is no consistent way this card will be summoned; outside of Level-altering tactics such as Galaxy Queen's Light, Tannhauser Gate and so forth.

 

I won't say much about the last one.

 

In terms of the first two, they're essentially stat boosters. Considering that cards like Number 101, Exciton, Judgment Dragon, Black Rose Dragon, Mirror Force or for that matter, card removal are very common; these two cards won't be very useful. They'd make decent beatsticks, yes, but that doesn't mean much in an era focused around effect removal.

 

In any case, you seriously need to work on your grammar and spelling issues (as there are several of them). Zaziuma has kindly written us all a guide to writing card grammar properly, so we can understand. The first two are clear, yes, last one, not so much. I would highly advise you read that, along with the guides that Toyo and .Saber have written for the section.

 

I'm not trying to say that your cards are bad, but you do have a lot of work ahead of you to fix things.

 

(And also, this is for Single cards; you have three cards in this thread. In any case though, this doesn't belong in RC; so moving this to the Experimental section.)

Ok im replying to you sorry about that I just noticed this is for single cards sorry. But I don't understand that part I KNOW you don't trubuite to make an Xyz card ok obvoisly you add your matirals i might of accidently done something. also for some reason my computer use to correct spelling mistakes for this site I don't know why it isn't any more. also I did make mistakes with Eygept sorry. Plus this is my first time doing this so of coarse I got a lot of mistakes.