sasukekun97 Posted September 22, 2014 Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 Okay so I am making an archetype surrounding chess. so i though about a card for "checkmate" I came up with this, but feel like it may be broken. so I have 2 questions for you lovely people. Question 1: Is thi too broken? (if so how can I fix it? (if I can)) Question 2: so far the archtype name is "chess". its too bland, so I'm asking if you have any suggestions. What should the archtype be called? Here is the card [spoiler=Card][attachment=42543:Checkmate!.jpg] [spoiler=Text]Activate only during your standby phase. This turn, if you win this duel by making your opponent's lifepoints 0 by a direct attack with a "chess" monster: you win the match. If you do not win the duel as stated above, you lose the duel.[/spoiler][/spoiler] So yeah any suggestions? please say so down below. Thanks anyways! goodbye, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted September 22, 2014 Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 There's a reason why Victory Dragon and every other Match Winner in existence is banned/illegal; because they do the exact same thing as this card, minus having the drawback. You need to completely revamp the effect, so it doesn't turn into a clone of said Match Winners. Additionally, card can't activate itself anyway because it's a Normal Spell and those cannot be chained during Standby Phase. If you changed it to a Quick-Play (or a Trap), then you can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
- Minimania - Posted September 22, 2014 Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 Not that it matters much, but you should get photos that don't have those website names and captions in the way of the photo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted September 22, 2014 Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 Not that it matters much, but you should get photos that don't have those website names and captions in the way of the photo. Please keep comments related to the card, not about whether the pics should be changed (even though it would look cleaner). You can mention this, but also say something about the card's design and so forth. Think I already pointed out its main point, but how do you see it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
- Minimania - Posted September 22, 2014 Report Share Posted September 22, 2014 I think that if you were to change it to an alt condition instead of a match winning card, it would be good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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