Creating New Series of Cards

[Chestnuts]

Hello, the name's Chestnuts. I'm currently planning on making a Series of Cards called the "Adventurer Series" and will be containing a bunch of somewhat original idealistic card. (Reason i'm saying somewhat is because I got the ideal from the Elemental Hero/D. Hero series of cards.) I currently only have one card as of now. Reason for that is I'm drawing most of these cards up as my mind goes on. I do have a ton of cards in mind I want to make supposedly but this is the first out of the line I've made. There will be more soon to come out.

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I am new here and if I did post this into the wrong category, please tell me. Other than that, here he is.

[Trebuchet MS]

Once you get more cards created, create a separate thread in the Multiple Cards section and house all your cards in the opening post of that thread.

 

It also helps to post your card text under your posted cards in case people want to quote the card text. Like what I'm about to do now.

 

The card text could use some polishing up. Let's see...

 

For each Monster with the Title "Adventurer" on your side of the field, This card gains 500 ATK and DEF Points for each "Adventurer" monster you control. This card can attack twice if You can banish 1 place any Level 5 or higher "Adventurer" monster from your Graveyard; and Banish it this card can make a second attack this Battle Phase.

This card gets the ATK/DEF boost off itself, turning it into an effective 3000/2000 on its own - is that what you've intended?

 

A 3k double attacker is pretty potent without any other supporting effects, but I can't properly evaluate it without knowledge of what the other Adventurers can do with it. We'll see in the future.

[Chestnuts]

Once you get more cards created, create a separate thread in the Multiple Cards section and house all your cards in the opening post of that thread.

 

It also helps to post your card text under your posted cards in case people want to quote the card text. Like what I'm about to do now.

 

The card text could use some polishing up. Let's see...

This card gets the ATK/DEF boost off itself, turning it into an effective 3000/2000 on its own - is that what you've intended?

 

A 3k double attacker is pretty potent without any other supporting effects, but I can't properly evaluate it without knowledge of what the other Adventurers can do with it. We'll see in the future.

Heya, thanks for the reply Back. I'll be sure to make those edits for you and try adding in more to make it balanced.