13 ghosts concept

[jellal17]

 

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This set is yet not complete but I'm putting this all up now.

 

 

http://i.imgur.com/kuZEV7I.jpg

(Picture removed for being NSFW)

[Kannachan]

I'm liking the set so far. Where did you find the artwork for the cards?

[The Seventh Samurai]

withered lover you might make into a Union monster

torn prince is a little overpowered. even without an effect, i think the strongest 4 star monster has 1900 or 1950.

the jackal should require you to banish 2 or more monsters imo

The torso needs to specify if it summons from the hand or deck or what.

hammer strikes me as OP, but for some reason synchros always are so whatever.

would appreciate it if you'd take a look at mine http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/326346-star-wars-rebel-alliancenew-republic-navy/

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

I'm liking the set so far. Where did you find the artwork for the cards?

Please follow the Advanced Clause.

You can just CnC 1 card, but just say something related to the design/flavor of the card.

 

Also, thread creator, post your card's effects underneath the card; especially with the last one since text is small.

 

 

EDIT: The pictures for Torso and Angry Princess are inappropriate for this site; please find less explicit images for those two cards, thanks.

The latter is literally a nude woman.

 

Fix it within 24 hours, or an Inappropriate Content warn will be given.

[Bronzegauntlets]

Your*

Its*

When determining whether to use it's or its/you're or your, remember that the apostrophe denotes that it's a contraction, meaning two words put together. (i.e. it's is it is, you're is you are.)

Nuff Said.

 

You should also fix the spacing on The Withered Lover.

The art on these cards are pretty cool, though the static background is kind of boring when you're viewing the whole set.

Also I'm pretty sure that your OCG is a little off,  but I'm not sure completely because I'm pretty bad at that kind of stuff. It's worth reviewing however.