CrabHelmet Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 Original: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. If you control no monsters' date=' you can Special Summon this card. You cannot Normal Summon this turn if you use this effect. While in your hand, this card's Level is treated as 8. This card cannot declare an attack. Once per turn, you can send up to 3 cards from the top of your Deck to the Graveyard. This card gains 900 ATK for each card sent to the Graveyard this way, until the end of this turn. When this card on your side of the field is destroyed as a result of battle and sent to your Graveyard, draw 1 card.[/quote'] New: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. If you control no cards' date=' you can Special Summon this card. You cannot Normal Summon this turn if you use this effect. While in your hand, this card's Level is treated as 8. This card cannot declare an attack. Once per turn, by sending 1 card from the top of your Deck to the Graveyard, this card gains 3000 ATK until your opponent's next Main Phase. When this card on your side of the field is destroyed as a result of battle and sent to your Graveyard, draw 1 card.[/quote'] Picture might be overused or might not fit perfectly, but I needed a picture of some sort and it seemed to work, so...yeah. I personally feel that balance is the most important thing in a card, so if possible, please give that priority over other factors like minor OCG errors when rating. [Disclaimer: I do not own the artwork used for my cards. I only use them as a means of increasing the overall quality and effect of my work. I do not claim ownership of them.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
atlantas-hero Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 not bad ill vote 6/10 make it holo ill rate it 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted March 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 not bad ill vote 6/10 make it holo ill rate it 8/10 I personally feel that balance is the most important thing in a card' date=' so if possible, please give that priority over other factors like minor OCG errors when rating.[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 I would say, make it when you control no cards, not no monsters. Just an opinion though. Also, make it's ATK boost last until your opponent's turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 meh, i think this card could be more.... balance almost seems non-existent to me, its like your milling out your own cards for an ATK defender..... 10/10 though if you want it rated on balance.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azuh Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 So is mostly a: Cyber Dragon + Card Trooper and its Trade-In able 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 Well, well, a card from Wilford Brimley himself. =PSeems nice to me. The image is great (besides been overused a little.)The card effect is well thought out too. Well done. ^_^8.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 Nice card 9/10. However i don´t see why it should be treated as a level 8 monster while in your hand. Awesome pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Chaos Pudding Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 Nice card 9/10. However i don´t see why it should be treated as a level 8 monster while in your hand. Awesome pic. Trade-In, TBQH. And I liked the card. Balance seems to be pretty good, though if it can't attack, why not let the ATK boost last until the end of your opponent's next turn? 8.8/10, TBQH. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 reminds me of mah smexy Cybah drahgon. i like it, very helpful in a DDT deck. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 It looks pretty good, and it seems pretty balanced, so 8.7/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOUL Posted March 29, 2008 Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 The Picture is Okay, but the Card is Awesome! 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted March 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2008 Nice card 9/10. However i don´t see why it should be treated as a level 8 monster while in your hand. Awesome pic. And I liked the card. Balance seems to be pretty good' date=' though if it can't attack, why not let the ATK boost last until the end of your opponent's next turn?[/quote'] It would be too easy to use as a wall. Some of the cards this is designed to work with: Trade-InAllure of DarknessDestiny DrawElemental Hero StratosReinforcement of the ArmyCrush Card VirusDeck Devastation VirusEradicator Epidemic Virus I'm thinking of changing it so you also need to control no spells/traps when it is Special Summoned, but that the effect lasts until the opponent's Main Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonisanoob Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 wow i see what you mean crab i really do liek this very well done and i think the pic is pretty damn sweet (ive never seen it been used b4 >.<) 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesus Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 The ATK and DEF should be ? instead of 0. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted March 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 Thanks, tonis! ]The ATK and DEF should be ? instead of 0. Why do you say that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Victory Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 nice card 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
N00B Hunter Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 yeah... i guess the ATK should last until your Op's turn...>_< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 beefed up card trooped. draw 2 cards 6.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted March 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 beefed up card trooped. draw 2 cards 6.9/10 Only on an extremely shallow exterior due to a superficial similarity of effect. Also, updated version is now up. Harder to Special Summon, higher final ATK (Union Attack, anyone?), less mill, effect lasts until opponent's Main Phase (for the viruses). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyson Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 So really, the card isn't useful on its own, since it can't attack and has multiple stipulations on its summoning. It's sole purpose is a support card. Destiny Draw, Allure of Darkness, Trade-In (the only viable reason to have it be Level 8 while in the hand) and the Virus series all would have this card to use as food. It can currently be Special Summoned by any means since it doesn't restrict its Special Summoning to its own effect. Discard it with Destiny Draw or Trade-In, then Monster Reborn it for a 3000 ATK wall, sounds great. All it's missing is the "When this card is Special Summoned, add 1 Trap Card from your Deck to your hand" to make its purpose incredibly clear to anyone. >_> 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrabHelmet Posted March 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 then Monster Reborn it for a 3000 ATK wall Can't be used as a wall; it loses its ATK too soon. Also, I just noticed that this combos with Arms Hole. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyson Posted March 30, 2008 Report Share Posted March 30, 2008 Irregardless, the fact that it's Special Summonable through any other means gives it a relatively steady mill effect. I don't think you should make it unable to attack, though. The sword in that picture looks too awesome to not attack with. Make it so that any Battle Damage it deals to your opponent becomes 100, so you can throw in a wacky Robbin Goblin combo! <_ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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