darkmanstill Posted February 10, 2015 Report Share Posted February 10, 2015 some might need me to change OCC of the card but any who its my new card its been long time since using this site Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arctic55 Posted February 11, 2015 Report Share Posted February 11, 2015 Once per turn, you can activate this cards effect. If you do: You reveal the top three cards from your deck and add the monster with the highest level to your hand and banish the rest of the cards. Your opponent reveals the top three cards of your deck and adds the monster with the highest level to their hand and banish the rest of the cards. There is my attempt ^ Love the picture btw. And maybe bump the stars to a 6 or 7 star. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkmanstill Posted February 12, 2015 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2015 Once per turn, you can activate this cards effect. If you do: You reveal the top three cards from your deck and add the monster with the highest level to your hand and banish the rest of the cards. Your opponent reveals the top three cards of your deck and adds the monster with the highest level to their hand and banish the rest of the cards. There is my attempt ^ Love the picture btw. And maybe bump the stars to a 6 or 7 star. Thank you. this was my first try aswell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinkerer Posted February 12, 2015 Report Share Posted February 12, 2015 I'm not the greatest at OOC either, but here goes: "Once per turn, you can activate this cards effect. Both players reveal the top three cards from their deck and adds the monster with the highest level to their hand (owner's choice if tied). Banish the rest of the cards." Of course, you can make it so that all the monsters of the highest level are added to the hand... Anyway, like Arctic was implying, those stats are too high for a lvl 5 effect monster. You should consider either raising the level of it or lowering its stats. And you might also want to capitalize "Tricks" in its name for aesthetic purposes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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