Thomas★Zero Posted March 4, 2015 Report Share Posted March 4, 2015 Performapal Pendulum PandaRank 4 EarthBeast/Xyz/Effect2 Level 4 "Performapal" MonstersThis card can only be summoned by Xyz Summon, cannot be summoned any other way. This card gains 500 ATK for each Pendulum Card in your Pendulum Zone. Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; apply one of the following effects:* Add 1 "Performapal" Pendulum Monster from your Deck.* Add 1 Face-Up "Performapal" Pendulum Monster from your Extra Deck* Until the End-Phase this turn: This card cannot be destroyed by your opponents card effects.ATK/1500 DEF/2000Following Ru-Class'es advice I tried making this...* Makes itself 2500 with 2 Pendulum cards in the pendulum Zone while acting as a 2000 with 1 and 1500 without.* Can add 1 "Performapal" Pendulum from either your deck or Extra Deck for divisive search and...*... instead you could have this tank through being protected by destruction effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted March 4, 2015 Report Share Posted March 4, 2015 Well, this is a step in the right direction. You still need to work on your capitalization and phrasing of key words. And I would split the RotA-like effect into 2 effects, one for the Deck, one for the Extra Deck.. But I don't have the time right now to fully correct the card's OCG and PSCT. As for the concept, it's also a step in the right direction, and I think Robin would love this beauty. A 2500 ATK monster at full steam, it works well with Wizard, Silver Claw, and Partnaga, gaining even more power as a credible beater, and the second (or third, when I'm done correcting it) optional effect gives it some resistance to what an opponent might pull. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas★Zero Posted March 4, 2015 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2015 Well, this is a step in the right direction.You still need to work on your capitalization and phrasing of key words.And I would split the RotA-like effect into 2 effects, one for the Deck, one for the Extra Deck..But I don't have the time right now to fully correct the card's OCG and PSCT.As for the concept, it's also a step in the right direction, and I think Robin would love this beauty. A 2500 ATK monster at full steam, it works well with Wizard, Silver Claw, and Partnaga, gaining even more power as a credible beater, and the second (or third, when I'm done correcting it) optional effect gives it some resistance to what an opponent might pull.Good job.I made the edit so the Extra Deck and Main deck effects are split. Also thanks for the advice when taking things to consideration. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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