Darklord Draxon Posted March 18, 2015 Report Share Posted March 18, 2015 I made this card the pic isn't the best right now and there is more to this Architype, but I hope to hear some opinions or any criticism before I continue. Here is a brief idea of what the architype is all about. The Architype is called "Animachine", they are FIRE Machine-type monsters that represent Animals with their original effect monsters that form Fusion monsters that take the form of space craft/cruisers. Please comment and rate. I need some people's input. Animachine Fortress ABCDEF-123456 - Armageddon Cannon Catapult Craft Omega LORE= "Animachine Fortress ABCDEF - Cannon Catapult Jet Force" + "Animachine Fortress 123456 - Armageddon Craft Alpha" Cannot be Special summon except by Fusion Summon. You must Fusion Summon this card from your Extra Deck by sending the above Fusion Material monsters you control to the Graveyard. This card's summon cannot be negated. Your opponent cannot activate cards or effects in response to this card's summon. When this card is Fusion Summon, you win the Duel. This card cannot be targeted or be destroyed by card effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cosmo. Posted March 18, 2015 Report Share Posted March 18, 2015 Hmmmm, i wanna see more about this archetype but here are a few fixes, Firstly fix that name, make it a lot shorter, it's practically unreadable. Second OCG... Cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. You must Fusion Summon this card from your Extra Deck by sending the above Fusion Material monsters you control to the Graveyard (You don't use Polymerization). This card's summon cannot be negated. Your opponent cannot activate cards or effects in response to this card's summon. When this card is Fusion Summoned, you win the Duel. This card cannot be targeted or be destroyed by card effects. Then the effect is just way too much, especially if you put it in Advanced card section... And the last part that the card can't be destroyed by anything's unnecessary, since it already has summoning protection and when you summon it you insta-win the duel... And third the "Other TCG Cards" section is for cards made for other card games, not for Yu-Gi-Oh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted March 18, 2015 Report Share Posted March 18, 2015 You posted this in the wrong section. Note that the section says Other TCG, which is for non-YGO games. Moved to the appropriate area. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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