Draconia support? - - - - Terror Dragoons of Draconia {Prime-Ace John}

[PrimeAceJohn]

Ok, they don't really support the Dragoons, but you know what I mean.

 

If you don't know the Draconia cards, there are only 2 and here they are:

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Dragoons_of_Draconia

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Sea_Dragoons_of_Draconia

 

Make sure you saw those 2^ first before seeing this card.

 

Also, please check out my Sea Lord/Beast archetype on Advanced Multiples, I need some comments on there.

 

Creds go to Aix for somehow finding this amazing artwork.

 

CnC always appreciated.

 

 

TERROR DRAGOONS OF DRACONIA

DARK

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[Fiend/Pendulum]

(4) Scale (4)

Pendulum Effect: While you have a face-up Normal Monster in your Pendulum Zone: You can reduce this card's Pendulum Scale to 2 OR increase it to 7. Once per turn, you can banish 1 Normal monster from your Graveyard to target 1 Spell/Trap card on your opponent's side of the field: Return that target to your opponent's hand.

Monster Lore: These fully armed soldiers defend the Draconia Empire as they hunt for their enemies from the Land of Leptillus. With a core of ancient powers bounded within their lances, they are highly feared by all.

ATK/ 2000   DEF/  900

[Spinny]

Hang on.
Error with the second effect here, did you intend it to be able to return a card you control to your opponents hand? Would be like an anime effect then xD
Really nice art and design other than that tho.

[PrimeAceJohn]

Hang on.
Error with the second effect here, did you intend it to be able to return a card you control to your opponents hand? Would be like an anime effect then xD
Really nice art and design other than that tho.

Thanks for telling me! I was completely oblivious I didn't notice that. I'll fix it as soon as possible.

 

And thanks a bunch.

[PrimeAceJohn]

buuump

[SirReal]

Something that can be an issue with the wording is that cards in the pendulum scales are treated as spell cards. It's probably alright but if you can find something that can get around that fact, that'll be nice. 

 

Onto the actual effect: Being a flexible scale for normal pendulums is fantastic, making it never dead, even when you open two of this. However, the scale changing effect has no once per turn clause so people can run the duel into time by changing its scale to 7, then to 2, then to 7 ad infinitum. Just a soft "Once per turn: you can..." will do the job. Considering you are playing this in normal pendulums, putting a normal pendulum monster in the grave is typically rare since you usually want to save your 2500 beaters for revival. But this does promote Xyz play since you will get (temporary) backrow clearing on top of detaching. 

 

Looks solid, balanced, and helps its archetype's weakness. Effect wise, I'd say this can be cleared for launch! 

 

Well done! Keep up the good work.