TX James Posted May 16, 2015 Report Share Posted May 16, 2015 thoughts on this card personally I think the level needs changing but I don't know what to recommendations would be welcome along with any other constructive criticism Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Swelterrier Posted May 16, 2015 Report Share Posted May 16, 2015 Twice per turn? it should be once per turn! I'm not that good... but twice per turn? they can only summon once per turn, and what if the card had sucky ATK and broken DEF? For example, a level 1 monster, 150 ATK, 2550 DEF. Wouldn't happen, but that could be a downfall to the card, Celtic Facts for you! ;D *just noticed that you aren't forced to, but try telling the effect to a newbie who just got the card to build up his collection! *also, there should be a . at the end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted May 16, 2015 Report Share Posted May 16, 2015 1 DARK Tuner + 1 non-Tuner Beast monster Up to twice per turn, during either player's turn, when your opponent Summons a monster: You can pay 1000 LP; change the Summoned Monster into face down Defense Position. This effect can be used up to twice per turn. WingedCelticGuardian, remember that this can also hit Special Summons. It's okay for temporarily "stunning" the monster and preventing the use of effects or fueling Synchro/Xyz Summons. But 1000 LP seems a little steep considering that this card is not the easiest to make and doesn't have the best stats. Maybe it helps the player think a little harder over which monsters they want flipped down. There are cases where multiple monsters can get Special Summoned at once. I'm going to assume this card can only work when only 1 monster is Summoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Swelterrier Posted May 16, 2015 Report Share Posted May 16, 2015 Ack, didn't notice that :l But the effect is awful for special summons with high DEF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted May 16, 2015 Report Share Posted May 16, 2015 Ack, didn't notice that :l But the effect is awful for special summons with high DEF. Then you obviously just choose not to use the effect at all, unless you have a really strong reason to not keep it face-up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Swelterrier Posted May 16, 2015 Report Share Posted May 16, 2015 Then you obviously just choose not to use the effect at all, unless you have a really strong reason to not keep it face-up. I always encounter you, by now I'm pretty sure my rank in card making is Grade A Dumbass xD But yet again, try explaining the card to a newbie. They will always use the effect! Well, most of them anyway. :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flare909 Posted May 17, 2015 Report Share Posted May 17, 2015 This effect is optional, what is this nonsense, it says he can flip down any monster he wants, if monster has "broken defense" then he doesn't need to flip it down, that stupid. Bro your card is fine, I would suggest to lower life points paid to 600 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Armoire Posted May 17, 2015 Report Share Posted May 17, 2015 The card overall, as it is right now, is fine. I really like it. The only way I can see it being made is with Junk Synchron and a Level 1 Beast. Or the Raccoons with a Plaguespreader Zombie. However, like Gadj said, 1000 is way too steep especially because: This card requires very specific Synchro Materials Prone to any effect negation/destruction Fairly low ATK/DEF My personal suggestion would be to: Lower the LP cost to 500-800 Increase the ATK to 2100-2300 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red_X Posted May 17, 2015 Report Share Posted May 17, 2015 Maybe it's just me, but the flavor on the card seems to be more defensive, which doesn't go with the stats. I personally would probably design it with 2300ish DEF and the same eff, and thus have it built as a slow down card that allows you to capitalize with other card. If you wanted you could also make this with unknown synchron and a level 3 beast (peropero, wind-up rat, darksoul, etc.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Swelterrier Posted May 18, 2015 Report Share Posted May 18, 2015 Never said the card sucked, but I keep saying over and over, try explaining the effect to a newbie! They will probably use the effect 24/7 until somebody teaches them.This effect is optional, what is this nonsense, it says he can flip down any monster he wants, if monster has "broken defense" then he doesn't need to flip it down, that stupid. 600 -.- I got a reason why to talk, and this topic is useless to me if im gonna get criticism for a simple misunderstanding. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flare909 Posted May 18, 2015 Report Share Posted May 18, 2015 Constructive criticism is only directed towards the card maker, so they can improve their design, however you didn't design this card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Swelterrier Posted May 21, 2015 Report Share Posted May 21, 2015 Hmm... good point. Anyways, try improving the attack, maybe to 2200? Defense? 2200/1700. Agree with me or agree with me not, atleast some opinions were made! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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