End Of The World SUPPORT! (written)

[Jrvasquez221]

Commencement of Rites
<continuos spell card>
Whenever a Ritual Spell card is send from the deck to the graveyard OR when a Ritual Monster(s) is ritual summoned; place 1 Rite counter on this card. You may remove any number of Rite counters from this card, then activate 1 of the following effects based on the number of Rite counters remove:
Remove 2: add 1 ritual monster card from your deck to your graveyard.
Remove 3: add 1 of your banished spell cards to your hand.
Remove 4: special summon 1 ritual monster from your hand.

Catastrophic End
<ritual spell card>
This card is used to Ritual Summon "Demise, King of Armageddon" or "Ruin, Queen of Oblivion" from your hand or graveyard. You must also send ritual monster(s) from your deck to your graveyard whose total level
(s) are equal to 8 and also by sending 1 "End of the World" from your deck to your graveyard. You may banish this card from your graveyard to target 1 "End of the World" ritual spell card in your graveyard; add that target to the hand.

Catastor, Servant of Armaggedon
<monster card> Fiend/effect DARK lv.4
Once per turn, you may pay 1000 life points to target 1 card on the field; send 1 ritual spell card from your deck to the graveyard, and if you do, destroy that target. When this monster is send to the graveyard; you may target 1 ritual spell card in your graveyard; add that target to your hand.

Destroya, Princess of Oblivion
<monster card> Fairy/effect LIGHT lv.4
Once per turn, you may send 1 ritual spell card from your deck to the graveyard to target 1 monster you control; that targeted monster can attack twice during this battle phase. If the sended Ritual spell card is "End of the World"; draw 1 card. When this monster card is send to the graveyard; target 1 of your banished ritual spell cards and add that target to your hand.

Judgement Day
<Ritual Spell card>
This card is used to ritual summon "Demise, King of Armaggedon" and "Ruin, Queen of Oblivion" from your deck. You must also send 1 "End of the World" and tribute monsters from your hand or field whose total levels equals 12. You may banish this card from your graveyard to reveal the top 5 cards of your deck; add to your hand any revealed level 8 DARK and/or LIGHT ritual monsters and send any remaining cards to your graveyard (any card send to the graveyard by this effect that has an effect that triggers when send to the graveyard are negated).

I will make more but those are the ones I have right now. Please comment on this cards, thank you

[The Highlander]

Why are catastor's and destroya's ATK and DEF not added ? ( I would also recommend limitations for destroya to prevent it from being a splashable double attack enabler/ make it send end of the world, while removing the draw part).

Anyways, the first card seems to be quite powerful, while not being too abusable (at the moment) (nekroz do not count) (however I would recommend a limitation for how often it can be used per turn, a routine safety ensurance to prevent unnecessary loops).

The first effect of commencement of the rituals should treat it as ritual summon, or how is it supposed to summon rituals from the hand ?

Otherwise those seem to be alright (destroya, commencement and catastor).

For catastrophic end ... its limitation to ruin and demise should be enough (perhaps the cycling is too much, however that might be trying to balancing it too much on standards of cards which are not limited to ruin and demise).

Judgement Day seems alright, however what is the actual point of summoning ruin and demise at once ? (unless you add a contact fusion for them).

[Jrvasquez221]

Thanks. I totally forgot to add the atk and def srry. Also , thanks for your advice, im.new to this website and I really appreciated the helpyou gave me. I will fix my cards

[Jrvasquez221]

Commencements of rites
_continuous spell card-
Whenever a Ritual Spell card is send from the deck to the graveyard OR when a Ritual Monster(s) is ritual summoned; place 1 Rite counter on this card. Once per turn, you may remove any number of Rite counters from this card, then activate 1 of the following effects based on the number of Rite counters remove:
Remove 2: add 1 ritual monster card from your deck to your hand.
Remove 3: add 1 of your banished spell cards to your hand.
Remove 4: special summon 1 ritual monster from your hand (this is treated as a Ritual Summon).

----I added the once per turn clause and made the special summon be treated as a ritual summon.


Catastrophic End
<ritual spell card>
This card is used to Ritual Summon "Demise, King of Armageddon" or "Ruin, Queen of Oblivion" from your hand or graveyard. You must also send ritual monster(s) from your deck to your graveyard whose total level
(s) are equal to 8 and also by sending 1 "End of the World" from your deck to your graveyard. During your Main Phase, except during the turn this card is send to the graveyard; you may banish this card from your graveyard to target 1 "End of the World" ritual spell card in your graveyard; add that target to the hand.

---On this one, i made it for its 2nd eff to not be allowed to be activated during the turn it is send to the graveyard, thus avoiding any loopings.


Destroya, Princess of Oblivion
<monster card> Fairy/effect LIGHT lv.4
Atk: 1600 Def: 1300
Once per turn, you may send "End of the World" from your deck to the graveyard to target 1 monster you control; that targeted monster can attack twice during this battle phase. When this monster card is send to the graveyard; target 1 of your banished ritual spell cards and add that target to your hand.

----- i changed the effect of sending any ritual spell card/from your deck to the graveyard to only ending End of the World. I also took out the drawing effect. I also added its atk and def.

For catastor...i only added its atk
(Atk: 1700 Def: 1300)

Btw. Judgement day is a key card since im planning to do a bigger monster (like a boss, but ita not gonna be a fusion)