cliffregistorm Posted June 22, 2015 Report Share Posted June 22, 2015 [spoiler=Effect Monsters]Cannot be used as a Synchro Material Monster, except for the Synchro Summon of a "Cyber" monster. If you Synchro Summon a monster using this card you can treat it has a level 3 monster. If you control a fusion monster while this card is in your Hand or Graveyard: You can Special Summon it. You can only use the effect of "Cyber Replicant" once per turn. If you Special Summon this card banish it when it leaves the field.If your opponent controls 1 or more monsters and you control no monsters, you may Special Summon this card from your hand. You may also Special Summon this card from your hand if you control 1 or more "Cyber" monsters, but this card's Level becomes 2 and its ATK is reduced by half; you cannot Special Summon other monsters aside from LIGHT Attribute or "Chimeratech" monsters on the turn this effect is used. This card's name is also treated as "Cyber Dragon". [spoiler=Fusion Monsters]2 "Cyber" monstersIf you Fusion Summon this card, you can also return the above monsters from your removed of play zone to the graveyard instead. (You do not need "Polymerization" this way.) When this card is Fusion Summoned target 1 face-up monster on the field and change it to a Machine-Type until the end of this turn. [spoiler=Synchro Monsters]1 Machine tuner + 1 "Cyber Dragon" non tuner monsterYou can send this face-up card to the Graveyard; select 1 card on your opponent field; banish it. If this card is removed from play you can special summon it. This card's name becomes "Cyber Dragon" while it is on the field or in the Graveyard. 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersIf you would Synchro Summon this card you can change the summon to a second normal summon. If this card battles a normal summoned monster it lose 1000 Atk, otherwise it gain 1000 Atk while battling another monster. This card is unaffected by Trap effects. 1 LIGHT Tuner + 1 LIGHT or DARK non-Tuner Machine-type monsterEach time your opponent Special Summon a monster, Inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. If this card leave the field by your opponent cards effects Special Summon 2 "Cyber dragon" with the same level from your graveyard & immediately after this effect resolve Xyz summon 1 LIGHT Machine-type monster using those 2 monsters only (this is a Quick Effect). [spoiler=Pendulum Monster]Cyber Nexus-CoreIf you control another "Cyber Dragon" in your other pendulum zone; you can fusion summon 1 "Cyber" Fusion Monster from you extra deck using monster you control, in your hand or face-up in your extra deck. (This Special Summon is treated as a Fusion Summon.) You can discard this card from your hand along with monster from your hand, field or attached has material to a Xyz monster: If you do Special summon 1 "Cyber" Fusion Monster Card that list the monster(s) sent this way (This Special Summon is treated as a Fusion Summon.) This card's name becomes "Cyber Dragon" while it is in your hand. [spoiler=Spell Cards]Return 1 "Cyber" Xyz or Synchro monster to the extra Extra Deck along with 1 face-up Special Summoned monster your opponent control to activate; Special summon 1 level 8 or lower Machine-Type "Cyber" fusion monster from your Extra Deck. The target monster on your opponent side of the field cannot activate any of it's effect(s) while it is the target of this card. Reveal 1 fusion monster from your Extra Deck to activate. 1) Shuffle your Extra Deck & your opponent select 1 random Card. Destroy 1 monster on your opponent side of the field with equal or lower Atk than the selected card. 2) If the revealed card is a "Chimeratech" monster banish 1 card on the field then reshuffle the Extra Deck & apply effect number 1. You can apply either 1 off these effects once per turn and only 1 "Chimeratech Widerange Cannon" can be activated per turn. You cannot apply any of these effects if you started the duel with lower than 15 cards in your Extra Deck. [spoiler=Trap Cards]..[spoiler=Related non-archetype] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Woloa Posted June 22, 2015 Report Share Posted June 22, 2015 Alright, the first issue I've come across is that Cyber Replicant can't be used to summon Cyber Discharge Dragon. I would either change the Replicant's effect to simply be "Cyber" monsters, or maybe monsters who's names include both "Cyber" and "Dragon", but, with the current wording the dragon's name would need to be changed to something like "Cyber Dragon, Discharge Type" in order for the replicant to work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted June 22, 2015 Report Share Posted June 22, 2015 They can just change the name of Discharge to "Cyber Dragon Discharge" (keeps the Cyber Dragon string of its name intact for Archetype reasons), or yeah just change the restriction to a "Cyber" Machine-Type monster for Replicant. I have no idea how you would word Discharge's effect though; I understand that its goal is to trigger Drei and Core (and other CyDra copies). Closest wording that I can probably give is "Once per turn: You can Special Summon 1 "Cyber Dragon" monster whose original printed name is not "Cyber Dragon" (from your hand or Deck), and if you do, you can activate its effects as if it was Normal Summoned." In any case, I'm not really fond of this thing being able to SS stuff from the Deck, and essentially bypass the usual requirements for triggering stuff like Drei and Core.I say this because Discharge + Drei (once effect triggers) become 2 LV5s, overlay into Nova, which then becomes Infinity. ------Replicant only really works with Proto-Cyber Dragon (if you do not change the Level) or Core/Prime-Cyber via effect (if you opt to treat it as a Level 3).There are other options, yes, but CyDras don't exactly have the space to run other Tuners, since they are more/less a Fusion-based Archetype (Xyz, they can do). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cliffregistorm Posted June 22, 2015 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2015 Thank for the feedback made some ajustement Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cliffregistorm Posted July 25, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 25, 2015 Don't know if anybody could help with these but is there a way to word a card (in this case Prime-Cyber Dragon) in a way that it would not prevent me from having 6 copie of the same cards in my deck? P.S. Shortest sentence possible would help alot & was trying to avoid wording it in the card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Christoph the Sky Sorcerer Posted July 27, 2015 Report Share Posted July 27, 2015 In regards to "Prime-Cyber Dragon", here's how I would recommend phrasing it: 'If your opponent controls one or more monsters and you control no monsters, you may Special Summon this card from your hand. You may also Special Summon this card from your hand if you control 1 or more "Cyber" monsters, but this card's Level becomes 2 and its ATK is reduced by half; you cannot Special Summon other monsters aside from LIGHT Attribute or "Chimeratech" monsters on the turn this effect is used. This card's name is always treated as "Cyber Dragon".' (Also, if you want to make official-looking Pendulum Cards, download the TCG Editor; I believe the link is pinned in the general forums, and it offers a lot of options the online version doesn't have.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted July 27, 2015 Report Share Posted July 27, 2015 (1) If your opponent controls a monster and you control no monsters, you can Special Summon this card (from your hand).(2) If you control at least 1 "Cyber" monster, you can Special Summon this card (from your hand). If Special Summoned this way, its ATK is halved and its Level becomes 2. You cannot Special Summon monsters the turn you activate this effect, except LIGHT and "Chimeratech" monsters.(3) This card's name is also treated as "Cyber Dragon". There is the string "This card's name is always treated as "Cyber Dragon", but that one will restrict you to 3 copies of original/this combined. --------In terms of the Pendulums, you mention "Cyber Nexus-Core" but it doesn't seem to exist here.Might want to add that, so we get an idea of what it does. As a whole, you can raise Wraith's scale to 6, so it also allows the original CyDra (and Prime) to be summoned if necessary.Right now, it can summon the rest of the Archetype (including themselves), bar those two. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/330737-zextra-pendulum-template-v3-includes-xyz/(Use this if you'd like to make cleaner Pendulums, although do what you need to). In regards to "Prime-Cyber Dragon", here's how I would recommend phrasing it: 'If your opponent controls one or more monsters and you control no monsters, you may Special Summon this card from your hand. You may also Special Summon this card from your hand if you control 1 or more "Cyber" monsters, but this card's Level becomes 2 and its ATK is reduced by half; you cannot Special Summon other monsters aside from LIGHT Attribute or "Chimeratech" monsters on the turn this effect is used. This card's name is always treated as "Cyber Dragon".' (Also, if you want to make official-looking Pendulum Cards, download the TCG Editor; I believe the link is pinned in the general forums, and it offers a lot of options the online version doesn't have.) Keep in mind this is classed as an OCG fix, and doesn't adhere to our standards.You need to write something related to how the cards are designed (effect/flavor-wise). First effect was properly worded already (as it's the same one on original CyDra). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cliffregistorm Posted July 27, 2015 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2015 Thanks for the help. Really appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cliffregistorm Posted November 9, 2015 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2015 Small update Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted November 9, 2015 Report Share Posted November 9, 2015 You're past the two month grace period for creator updates.Feel free to remake thread though, but have to lock it. (September 27th was the deadline to get it in) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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