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TF2_The_Scout Posted June 27, 2015 Report Share Posted June 27, 2015 OCG fix "Destroy all WIND attribute monsters on the field. If at least 1 WIND monster is destroyed by this effect, all monsters you control become FIRE attribute monsters while this card is face-up on the field." There's only 1 field to begin with, so saying "your field" makes no sense because it implies 2 fields. This card is also way too situational. I can't think of any way becoming fire monsters would be an advantage other than a couple of extra deck monsters and WIND isn't really a big deal now as much as dark. Though, against me, this card would be devastating since I play Harpies and Yosenju. Also, you need to change this to a continuous spell, that way the last part makes sense as to why it would still be face-up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamesXCx Posted June 27, 2015 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2015 OCG fix "Destroy all WIND attribute monsters on the field. If at least 1 WIND monster is destroyed by this effect, all monsters you control become FIRE attribute monsters while this card is face-up on the field." There's only 1 field to begin with, so saying "your field" makes no sense because it implies 2 fields. This card is also way too situational. I can't think of any way becoming fire monsters would be an advantage other than a couple of extra deck monsters and WIND isn't really a big deal now as much as dark. Though, against me, this card would be devastating since I play Harpies and Yosenju. Also, you need to change this to a continuous spell, that way the last part makes sense as to why it would still be face-up.Yeah, I meant "your side of the field". xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TF2_The_Scout Posted June 27, 2015 Report Share Posted June 27, 2015 It also still needs to be continuous, that way the "while face-up on the field" makes sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goodfusion Posted June 27, 2015 Report Share Posted June 27, 2015 Another OCG fix: The word 'attribute' is unnecessary here, you could just put "Destroy all WIND monsters...". Anyway, the card is unusual and I can't think of a deck that could really benefit it - but I do like the idea. If you were wanting to change your monsters to FIRE it would probably be easier to use DNA Transplant or something. If there was a WIND archetype that benefited having your monsters destroyed (similar to the Fire King archetype) then this could be useful especially if there was a point to making your monsters FIRE. Of course, you could always put it in your Side Deck as extra copies of Raigeki against WIND decks, but this card falls in the 'weird and cool, but not that useful' section. Which isn't necessarily a bad thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamesXCx Posted June 27, 2015 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2015 It also still needs to be continuous, that way the "while face-up on the field" makes sense.Fixed, thanks. Another OCG fix: The word 'attribute' is unnecessary here, you could just put "Destroy all WIND monsters...". Anyway, the card is unusual and I can't think of a deck that could really benefit it - but I do like the idea. If you were wanting to change your monsters to FIRE it would probably be easier to use DNA Transplant or something. If there was a WIND archetype that benefited having your monsters destroyed (similar to the Fire King archetype) then this could be useful especially if there was a point to making your monsters FIRE. Of course, you could always put it in your Side Deck as extra copies of Raigeki against WIND decks, but this card falls in the 'weird and cool, but not that useful' section. Which isn't necessarily a bad thing. It actually has uses for other cards I made like: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/336421-hell-titan-fire-shrine/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goodfusion Posted June 27, 2015 Report Share Posted June 27, 2015 Well, this card wouldn't actually work with Fire Shrine because this card doesn't make monsters in your hand FIRE as well. Maybe you could so you would be able to use it with it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamesXCx Posted June 27, 2015 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2015 Well, this card wouldn't actually work with Fire Shrine because this card doesn't make monsters in your hand FIRE as well. Maybe you could so you would be able to use it with it?Oh, gee there is a mistake in "Fire Shrine". It's supposed to discard one beast type and tribute one FIRE. xDFixed it now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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