[WRITTEN] Man Power

[Max_K]

Normal Spell
Reveal all set spell/trap cards your opponent controls, then destroy all "Hole" cards. You can banish this card from your Graveyard to change 1 monster your opponent controls to defense mode. That monster DEF becomes 0.

[evil cucumber]

Ok, so this card

-allows you to see every s/t your opponent controls

-potentially removes one of the most common staples in this game, Bottomless Trap Hole

-on the same turn you activated it, this can be banished during your main phasr to change position of something to defense and ultra cripple its def

-it doesnt target at all

 

 

i think you intended to make just a spell with a secondary eff but forgot to add more restrictions to it or conditions that may help with the balance design.

 

First of all, it shold have some OPT clause to prevent abuse. Also cards like this (specially spells) tend to have a restriction in which they cant be banished for the second eff during the turn they are sent to Graveyard. I suggest you take a look at Galaxy Cyclone, Good and Evil of the Burning Abyss... since theyre all spells, its much easier to send thrm to grave, and thats why they need that restriction.

 

The non-targeting part may be just me being iffy about it, but i feel like it can come out as a cheap eff that win games sometimes, becausr piercing damage effs can become really destructive if coupled with this. Putting a 'target' in there should help, i guess.

 

Also, no point in putting a freaking porn actor's name in a card. You should be ashamed of that (had to look it on google and now i ll be scared for at least 2 days..)

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

* unfortunately, English Wikipedia doesn't have his name; popped up on the Portuguese one, but that's it *

 

But yeah, it pops Hole Traps (so suppose Traptrix are screwed against it; that and Bottomless).

That, and it's non-targeting + puts stuff in Defense Position with no DEF.

 

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If you make an effect that affects stuff on the field, it should be TARGETING removal, because even if your opponent decides to protect your initial choice; you'll still get to choose another card and affect that one.

 

That, and hard OPT on both effects.