Snjórdrekinn Cub

[Fat Cat Ultim]

New card.(Constructive) Criticism welcome.

 

 

LORE :

 

Snjórdrekinn Cub : 1000 ATK / 1300 DEF

WIND/DRAGON/RNK 3

 

If this face-down card was  destroyed and sent to the Graveyard during Damage Calculation: You can target 1 monster your opponent controls; while face-up on the field the target cannot be Tributed, used as a Fusion, Synchro or Xyz Material for a Summon or sent to the Graveyard by a card's effect or as a cost (excluding effects that would destroy it)  and cannot change its Battle Position or attack until your opponent's second End Phase.

 

PS : Second End Phase to avoid further conflict with @Robin

[Fat Cat Ultim]

Bump?

[Dramatic Crossroad]

Usually the condition includes the method it was sent to the Graveyard with.

 

If this face-down card was  destroyed and sent to the Graveyard during Damage Calculation: You can target 1 monster your opponent controls; the target cannot be Tributed, sent to the Graveyard by a card effect, cannot change its Battle Position or declare an attack until your opponent's next End Phase.

 

This underscored part  of the effect can cause a lot of confusion. Usually cards (when not tributed) are sent to the Graveyard when destroyed. This does not prevent the target's destruction, but if destroyed...it will not be sent to the Graveyard?.. also if you're willing to commit to fully blocking the monster, you can add more restrictions to what the player can't do with it.

 

Ignore or take into account - your choice

[spoiler=my suggestion]

If this face-down card was  destroyed and sent to the Graveyard during Damage Calculation: You can target 1 monster your opponent controls; while face-up on the field the target cannot be Tributed, used as a Fusion, Synchro or Xyz Material for a Summon or sent to the Graveyard by a card's effect or as a cost (excluding effects that would destroy it)  and cannot change its Battle Position or attack until your opponent's next End Phase.

[Fat Cat Ultim]

@DramaticCrossroad : Thank you for your input.A team of elite trained monkeys will receive it and initialize the correction phase.

 

 

 

 

EDIT : Correction Phase complete.

[Dramatic Crossroad]

@DramaticCrossroad : Thank you for your input.A team of elite trained monkeys will receive it and initialize the correction phase.

 

 

 

 

EDIT : Correction Phase complete.

 

LOL, you're a wacky guy.

 

It was just a suggestion, sometimes my card grammar skills are not top-notch so it's always OK to ask a 3rd party (if one ever bothers to post a comment in the topic)

Anyway to go with the CnC - as this is in Casual and not advanced it's not intended to break the meta in half, although in my opinion the debuffs it give should last a bit more or/and block the effects as well - it might tip it over the OP side of the game, but well, with these stats and kamikaze effect - why not get the full monster-locking package.

Also... Is this a part of a mythology-inspired monster set? Sounds north-european of some kind...

[Fat Cat Ultim]

I thought that making the effects last a bit longer will pour some OP sauce on this poor giant midget.

And about The Full Monster-Locking Pack™

that'll be 50 US Dollars with shipping fees included.

 

(JK there will be more cards with more powerful effects)

 

About the "North-European" theme thingy,you're correct.I was kind of inspired by Icelandic mythology,and FYI : the tongue-twister literally means "Snow Dragon"

[Trebuchet MS]

How would a face-down monster be destroyed during damage calculation? If it's being attacked, it flips face-up for damage calculation and theoretically won't fulfill that condition anymore.

[Fat Cat Ultim]

@Gadjiltron :What I wanted to say,is when this card is destroyed by battle.And I accidently confused this with another card and wrote that.Sorry,my bad