Technical Support

[Fat Cat Ultim]

 

LORE : 

When a face-up Machine-type monster you control is sent to the Graveyard by a card effect OR destoyed by battle,you can send the top card in your deck to the Graveyard: Special Summon that monster to your side of the field,it gains 700 ATK and DEF,but its effects are negated and it is destroyed during your next Standby Phase.After this effect resolves,pay 200 LP.

 

 

PS : There might be some mistakes in the OCG.Feel free to correct them

PS2(Not PlayStation2) : I made this card on the concept of Tech Support,excavate to call,temporary function,then the machine breaks down,but you still need to pay sum kash. 

[Fat Cat Ultim]

Bump

[Sleepy]

A re-wording would be along the lines of:

 

When a face-up Machine-Type monster you control is sent to the Graveyard by a card effect or it is destroyed by battle: You can send the top card in your Deck to the Graveyard; Special Summon that monster and have it gain 700 ATK and DEF, but its effect is negated and it is destroyed during your next Standby Phase. After this effect resolves, you lose 200 LP.

 

Of course, if you really really really want the last LP transaction to be a payment for X reason and not something similar to Soul Charge's after-effect, you can replace "lose" for "pay" in my wording^

Other than that, I'm pretty confident in my wording.

 

The card is just what you intended it to be. Since the revival is not permanent, you can only make offensive use of this card if you crash your own monster against something equal or bigger. Otherwise if you revive something your opponent destroyed during their turn, it won't survive past the start of your turn. At least it gets a nice boost in the process and Unions can take the hit afterwards if you play certain cards.

 

If I had to suggest anything, you probably don't need to negate the monster's effect on top of everything else. That opens up to a little more potential.