niconicoally Posted September 14, 2015 Report Share Posted September 14, 2015 Im gonna be moving this topic to multiples under my actual account so im gonna lock this one. Sorry for the inconvenience LapotranLevel 7, EARTHWarrior/EffectYou can Tribute 2 "potran" monsters, except "Lapotran" to Special Summon this card (from your hand or Graveyard). When a monster declares an attack: You can negate the attack, then draw 1 card. You can only activate this effect of "Lapotran" once per turn. This card inflicts piercing damage when attacking a Defense Position monster.2500/2000 LipotranLevel 4/ EARTHWarrior/EffectWhen this card is Normal or Special Summoned: You can reveal 1 "potran" monster from your hand, then target 1 face-up monster your opponent controls; its ATK and DEF becomes 0 until the End Phase of the next turn. You must also control another face-up "potran" monster to activate and resolve this effect. You can only activate the effect of "Lipotran" once per turn.1900/200(her right arm is a magic rod) LupotranLevel 2/EARTHWarrior/EffectWhen your opponent declares a direct attack: you can Special Summon this card (from your hand) in Attack Position, and if you do, negate the attack and end of the Battle Phase. If Summoned this way, Banish it when it leaves the field, and skip your next draw phase. This card cannot change battle positions, and must attack if able.500/500(Her right arm is a shield) LepotranLevel 4/EARTHWarrior/EffectWhen this card is Normal Summoned: You can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "potran" monster from your hand. You cannot Special Summon monsters, except "patron" monsters for the rest of the turn after you activate this effect. When a "potran" monster, except "Lepotran" is Special Summoned while you control this face-up card: You can add 1 "potran" monster, except "Lepatron" from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand. You can only activate this effect of "Lepotran" once per turn.900/1500(Her left arm is a magnet) LopotranLevel 3/EARTHWarrior/EffectYou can discard 1 card to Special Summon this card (from your hand). Once per turn, you can discard 1 "potran" card: target 1 Spell/Trap card on the field; destroy it. You must control this face-up card to activate and resolve this effect.1000/1000Imagine her right arm is a cannon StopotranCounter TrapWhen a Spell/Trap card is activated is activated while you control a face-up "potran" monster: reveal 1 "potran" monster in your hand; negate the activation of that card, and if you do, destroy it. If you control a face-up "Lapotran", you can then draw 1 card. DespotranTrapYou can only activate 1 "Despotran" per turn. During this turn, each time a "potran" monster you control destroys a monster by batlle, apply 1 of the following effects:●O Draw 1 card●O Your opponent discards 1 card. Part of the upcoming Potran cards! A series of monsters who are warriors, who all have one weapon where one of their limbs would be.This is the boss monster! (maybe) Sorry for the watermark, I literally drew that myself and afraid the art will get stolen. And this took me a hell of a long time to draw, sorry any more will take a while. Once I complete enough cards, I also wanted to make a short comic spin-off with these cards. I used to be on this site sooo many years ago, so I still know about most of the rules and general things about the site ehehe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted September 14, 2015 Report Share Posted September 14, 2015 Well, unless you post the other "potran" monsters, can't really say how powerful the SS effect will be.Just as a sidenote, post support cards before this (or concurrently). Anyway, it negates attacks and gets a free draw out of it.Personally, I don't think you should be rewarded for negating an attack via its own effect, especially since it is a soft OPT (meaning that it does not stop other copies from triggering). I'd get rid of the free drawing effect and/or make it a hard OPT (this means that you trigger it once, and it cannot be activated again that turn, even with duplicate copies). Again, we don't know about the scope of "potran"s, so can't say how easy/difficult it will be to get a duplicate copy out. Piercing effect is fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
niconicoally Posted September 14, 2015 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2015 Well, unless you post the other "potran" monsters, can't really say how powerful the SS effect will be.Just as a sidenote, post support cards before this (or concurrently). Anyway, it negates attacks and gets a free draw out of it.Personally, I don't think you should be rewarded for negating an attack via its own effect, especially since it is a soft OPT (meaning that it does not stop other copies from triggering). I'd get rid of the free drawing effect and/or make it a hard OPT (this means that you trigger it once, and it cannot be activated again that turn, even with duplicate copies). Again, we don't know about the scope of "potran"s, so can't say how easy/difficult it will be to get a duplicate copy out. Piercing effect is fine. Yeah, I'll make a small change so only one copy can activate its effect. I was gonna put in that you can only have1 copy on the field but i forgot to put that in but the thing you said is much better. I'm still trying to think of the other cards, so sorry for making this one by itself to everyone reading lol.I'll probably edit the op post every so often with the 'written' versions of the cards, until i get around to actually drawing more art. Since I'm up and not feeling tired, im just gonna type some more right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
niconicoally Posted September 14, 2015 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2015 Updated with more patrons so you can sort of have an idea on where its going! They're mainly a hand advantage oriented archetype. Lepotran's effect is different than in the picture, sorry! As you can tell, they go to la li lu le lonext up might be do re mi fa so la ti do haha.... waitAlso using the back ground as place holders till i draw up more patrons Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
niconicoally Posted September 14, 2015 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2015 I literally just remembered my old login info, so i will probably now only use this account to update this thread in case anyone is wondering who i washttp://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/user/220910-shizuku-oikawa/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizuku Oikawa Posted September 14, 2015 Report Share Posted September 14, 2015 Updated with two new cards, which both sort of have like unfinished or just somewhat BAD art in comparison to LapotranI will fix those when im like actually done completing artwork for the other potran monsters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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