[Written] The Weeping Woman

[Arimetal]

La Llorona
WATER
LV 3
Fiend/Spirit/Effect
1000/900
Cannot be Special Summoned. During the End Phase of a turn this card was Normal Summoned or flipped face-up: Return this card to the hand. When this card is summoned: Place 1 Weeping Counter on every other face-up monster on the field. During either player's Main Phase, you can discard this card; Banish all monsters with a Weeping Counter. You cannot activate this effect the turn you summon "La Llorona".

[Dova]

This card has so much staple potential. I really like the fact that it relates to no card whatsoever, and has this power on its own. I like the effect, but I think it should be "During either player's Main Phase or Battle Phase" to give your opponent a chance to fix something during the End Phase, Standby Phase or Draw Phase.

[Arimetal]

Good idea. I thought maybe to do something like that, but I thought it was a bit ugh.

 

Updated effect.

[Arimetal]

Bump

[Astolfo]

Every... other?

wat

[Arimetal]

Is that not the correct PSCT?

[Astolfo]

No the issue is how do you pick every other?

And there's never been a PSCT case like this as far as I remember.

[Dragulas]

About the name, shouldnt it be llorona? (dont know if you named it llorana intentionally)

I dont think a set monster is able to activate an effect (on the self-bouncing part). Shouldnt be as all spirits:

 

Cannot be Special Summoned. During the End Phase of the turn this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up: Return it to the hand. (?)

 

I really like the concept of the card, an easy out for problematic cards, but being able to potentially banish all monsters from a single card is too much in my opinion. Since this fits with spirits most of the cases you wont have a monster to be affected by. That being said its effect is too easy to use: summon it, activate and put the counters, end the turn, opponent's turn starts, main phase, activate wipe out their board. it seems a little unfair. It can recycled with salvage also

 

Maybe puting a counter for every spirit on the field (You will have at least 1 and if you combine this with nikitama 2). 

[Arimetal]

About the name, shouldnt it be llorona? (dont know if you named it llorana intentionally)

I dont think a set monster is able to activate an effect (on the self-bouncing part). Shouldnt be as all spirits:

 

Cannot be Special Summoned. During the End Phase of the turn this card is Normal Summoned or flipped face-up: Return it to the hand. (?)

 

I really like the concept of the card, an easy out for problematic cards, but being able to potentially banish all monsters from a single card is too much in my opinion. Since this fits with spirits most of the cases you wont have a monster to be affected by. That being said its effect is too easy to use: summon it, activate and put the counters, end the turn, opponent's turn starts, main phase, activate wipe out their board. it seems a little unfair. It can recycled with salvage also

 

Maybe puting a counter for every spirit on the field (You will have at least 1 and if you combine this with nikitama 2).

 

Here is how I see it:

 

It requires you normal summon

It is slow

The only reliable way to search this is Aratama

That being said, it is searchable

 

I feel this balances out as a face-up only dark hole that banishes.

 

 

Yes it is suppose to be Llorona, thank you. Also, fixed the Spirit clause.

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This card is useful against almost invincible monsters (cannot be destroyed by battle or card effects), but requires two turns to st up correctly, still the counters cannot be removed so there's always chance to wipe them out of the field...