Neonyle Posted November 6, 2015 Report Share Posted November 6, 2015 This is my first custom card posted here During either player's turn, if this card is in your hand or Graveyard: You can target 1 LIGHT monster you control; Special Summon this card in Defense Position, and if you do, that target cannot cannot be destroyed by battle or by card effects until the end of this turn, also banish this card when it leaves the field. If this card was special summon for it's effect; Send the top 2 cards of your deck to the graveyard You can only use this effect of "Aegis, Shield of the Lightsworn" once per turn. During your End Phase: Send the top 2 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard. I found the image on google image Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TF2_The_Scout Posted November 6, 2015 Report Share Posted November 6, 2015 OCG During either player's turn: You can Special Summon this card in Defense Position, and if you do, target 1 LIGHT monster; It cannot cannot be destroyed, but it cannot activate its effect or attack until the end of the next turn. During your End Phase: Send the top 2 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard. This card cannot be tributed or be used as material in a Synchro or Fusion Summon for the next 3 turns. Yeah, this isn't really good. It protects 1 Lightsworn, sure, but at a cost of it can't do anything. This card can't even be used as material for what the deck needs. It tries way too hard to be balanced, but instead has a huge ball and chain on its leg. Please take out all the unnecessary turns until you can do something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neonyle Posted November 6, 2015 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2015 effect update, thanks for the help egotistic, I still have some ideas left for this card, a rework, some buffs, ect ect, if this card is still weak. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragulas Posted November 6, 2015 Report Share Posted November 6, 2015 One quick thing, you forgot to specify from where the card is being special summoned, i suppose is from the hand, also the OPT clause must be at the end of the effect is going to restrict, being at the end of the whole text restricts your milling effect, not the special summon one. And targeting a card happens before resolution: During either player's turn, if this card is in your hand: You can target 1 LIGHT monster you control; Special Summon this card in Defense Position, and if you do, that target cannot cannot be destroyed by battle or by card effects until the end of this turn. You can only use this effect of "Aegis, Shield of the Lightsworn" once per turn. During your End Phase: Send the top 2 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard. The card is fine but it doesnt do much for lightsworns, if you want to make better, you can make it so it can special summon itself from the graveyard too (but you will have to put something banish it when it leaves the field to avoid loops). Since you probably are going to mill the card anyways, at least it will stay alive in the graveyard, and if you use it as an xyz material it will dodge that clause of being banished. Its just an idea: During either player's turn, if this card is in your hand or Graveyard: You can target 1 LIGHT monster you control; Special Summon this card in Defense Position, and if you do, that target cannot cannot be destroyed by battle or by card effects until the end of this turn, also banish this card when it leaves the field. You can only use this effect of "Aegis, Shield of the Lightsworn" once per turn. During your End Phase: Send the top 2 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neonyle Posted November 8, 2015 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2015 Effect updated. Thanks for the idea about special summon from hand or grave, JuanoGS11 ^.^ I also added one more effect myself, hope this is fairly good card now ._. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowsapex Posted November 10, 2015 Report Share Posted November 10, 2015 I think this card is really good for Lightsworns, and for other light archetypes as well. It turns Raiden into an instant Michael by just having this card in your hand or by milling it with Raiden's effect. The graveyard part might make it too good (but then again I don't play Lightsworns). You could make it so that it just banished itself from the graveyard to protect a LIGHT monster, and not banish it if it was summoned from hand.Eh, it's probably fine like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♪ ♪Aria ♪ ♪ Posted November 10, 2015 Report Share Posted November 10, 2015 The 2000 defense and protection effect reflects the title "Shield of the Lightsworn"... Savoury Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadychaosblack Posted November 10, 2015 Report Share Posted November 10, 2015 make it a tuner and its useful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadowsapex Posted November 11, 2015 Report Share Posted November 11, 2015 No, it does a lot already. It doesn't need to be a tuner or it'd allow any LIGHT archetype to easily access Synchros. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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