Nightfallen Posted May 20, 2008 Report Share Posted May 20, 2008 Well, he as lost before a couple times. Maybe this will be one of thoughs that only come one a hundrade duels. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightfallen Posted May 21, 2008 Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 Sorry for the double post, but it has been more then 12 hours. Anyway, you know when the next chapter is comeing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted May 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2008 Chapter 3 has barely begun' date=' and I'll try to get it done sooner or later.[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightfallen Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 Chapter 3 has barely begun' date=' and I'll try to get it done sooner or later.[/quote'] ok, its 3 days later, I can help you if you want? Just trying to make it sooner Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 Come on,come on!Give us,give us chapter 3! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted May 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 Lord Whye, is it okay if I send Nightfallen Marcus's entire Decklist? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 26, 2008 Report Share Posted May 26, 2008 Well,I see no harm in doing that,so go ahead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted May 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Alright, I got part of Chapter 3 finished, now I need to finish the next part that's helpful to the plot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted May 28, 2008 Report Share Posted May 28, 2008 Ok then,just get to it!I'm dying to see what comes next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted May 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 29, 2008 Or I can just mess around with you guys and purposely take a while. No seriously, my school year ends a week from tomorrow, so I'll have more time to work on this, and the next chapter needs a lot of work with the second half. Once it's ready, I'll check with Umbra or Nightfallen. I hope I can finish Chapter 3 before then. Also, I changed the duel finished up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightfallen Posted May 30, 2008 Report Share Posted May 30, 2008 Um, Shadow, would you mind if I remake my characters Deck? I mean sence you havent used him in the Fan Fic yet? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 Sure, why not? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2008 Sure, why not? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 6, 2008 Sorry to DP, but I've gotten part of Chapter 3 complete. Should I just put that up and call it "Chapter 3, Part 1"? I know you people want the new chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted June 6, 2008 Report Share Posted June 6, 2008 Write the entire chapter first, then put it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 6, 2008 Alright, I just hope people don't get too impatient by then. It's really hard to write this Chapter, since I'm grounded(But I am allowed online occasionally) and it's really hard to organize the plot in this chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted June 6, 2008 Report Share Posted June 6, 2008 I could assist you, you know. One writer to another. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 6, 2008 Thanks for the help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T. Sankara Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 Okay, I'm very impressed. Me and wyhe are working on a fic of our own, but mean while, is it too late? Name: KibaAge: 16Deck Type: Burn, StallBio: He has been a fan of Jaden's for a long time. Since last year, when he first watched Jaden duel, he has dreamed of the day in which he would challenge him. He was raised in Domino city, but when both his parents died in a bloody murder, he was taken in by Professor Crowler, a good frined to his parents. Its his first year at Duel Academy. If I can join, I'll pm you the deck list. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 Thanks for the comment. Sorry, but no more characters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T. Sankara Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 aww well, but looks good so far. when's chapter 3? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 That's the problem. I've finished the first part of Chapter 3, but I have serious writer's block for the next part. Umbra has helped me with the part I intend to use to end the chapter, but I don't have anything in-between. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T. Sankara Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 then let me help. ive got a pretty creative mind, and i'd be honired to. That is of course, if you want me to. . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted June 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2008 Holy crap, I finally finished this chapter. It's a bit shorter than the last Chapter, but hey, at least it's better than nothing. Chapter 3: The New Threat Jaden was facing Marcus, a Celestial Warrior. Jaden had Elemental Hero Glow Neos on the field and was at 1300 Life Points. Marcus had Big Shield Gardna in Defense Mode and 3950 Life Points. Marcus had just summoned White Knight Axewielder. “I must thank you Jaden.” Marcus began. “White Knight Axewielder is my strongest card, and when he is summoned when Torture Dungeon is destroyed, you take 1000 damage!” 300 “Alright, I think I’ll equip Glow Neos with Instant Neospace, so he stays on the field. Also, since I destroyed your Torture Dungeon, I can attack you directly!” Glow Neos successfully attacked Marcus, reducing his Life Points to 1450. “Now I’ll end my turn with a face-down.” Marcus drew his card. “I think I have this duel won. White Knight Axewielder, destroy his Glow Neos!”"Not so fast!" Jaden shouted. "I activate Contact Out, so I separate Glow Neos back to Neos and Glow Moss." Marcus laughed. “It doesn’t matter. On my next turn, I'll easily destroy your Neos, and thanks to my Axewielder’s special effect, you'll take damage equal to your monster’s Attack. The next turn will be your last, so it best be worth it!” Jaden drew his card and looked at it hopefully. “Perfect. I summon Neo-Spacian Air Hummingbird, so now I'll use Contact Fusion with Neos and Air Hummingbird to summon Elemental Hero Air Neos!” Jaden’s new monster appeared, floating the air. Marcus shook his head. “Disappointing. Are you done?” Jaden chuckled. “Not really. Since my Life Points are much lower than yours, Air Neos gains the diffence as Attack Points!” Air Neos’s Attack raised to 3850. “Now I play H-Heated Heart, so Air Neos gains 500 more Attack!” Air Neos further raised to 4350. “Now, finish off his White Knight Axewielder!” Air Neos beat it’s wings, sending waves at White Knight Axewielder, destroying it. Marcus’s Life Points finally fell to 0. Marcus dropped to the floor as Jaden approached him. "I must say, you're pretty good." Marcus said. Jaden kept a stern face when he spoke. "Thanks for the compliment. Tell me, how do your friends plan to bring back the Light of Destruction." Marcus turned his head. "I don't know. Our leader said that if we defeat you, he'll return, and we may keep our reward." Jaden raised an eyebrow."Reward?""Yes, our leader gave us a gift for allying with him. Mine was the gift of returning to life when he sought me out. But alas, since I failed, I am not one for this world. I bid you farewell." Marcus started to glow white, but Jaden had one last quesiton."Wait! Who's your leader?" Jaden asked in desperation. Marcus shook his head. "I don't know his name, but he said he had a score to settle with one of your friends. Aster I believe it was? Now, goodbye." Marcus was glowing completely as he vanished. "So The D's behind this?" a voice spoke. Everyone turned and saw Aster on the stairs. "It doesn't really surprise me," he continued as he walked down the stairs. "since he was under the control of the Light." Jaden walked up to Aster. "Hey Aster. What are you doing here?" Aster chuckled."Are you kidding me, how could I miss your guys's graduation? Anyway, no doubt he's here for revenge, just like the Light of Destruction." Jaden nodded."Probably, but Aster, what do you know about him?" Aster scowled. "More than you think." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted June 16, 2008 Report Share Posted June 16, 2008 *gazes at duel*and so it ends...I guess it's ok Now,back at the main issue,the D is the mastermind behind all this. Fanfic Advice from Raviel: Don't give spoilers out so soon, lest your viewers have less excitement for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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