Posting all cards for my 1st deck here! All cards are incomplete, need advice!

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Card 1 - Imp Scout

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Card 2 - Demon Colossus

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Could you just put all the cards in your first post by editing it? (Button at the bottom)

And while I'm here, let me review your cards

Imp Scout is too good and generic. It searches any DARK monster out there, and there are lots of really powerful DARK monsters. I'm sure someone can figure out a way to use it for an OTK or something. It might not be that bad but it's something I'd rather DARK monsters not have.

And the second card is also too generic, and people can probably figure out a way to abuse that too. Destroy it with their own spells to summon any DARK from your anywhere...

If you're going to make support for such a broad category like DARK, you need to limit the power of your cards. Or you can just make them all into an archetype and support that archetype.

 

OCG:

Imp Scout - When this card is Summoned: Add 1 DARK monster from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.

Demon Colossus - If this monster is destroyed by a Spell/Trap effect: Special Summon 1 DARK monster from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard.

[RingerPlays]

Could you just put all the cards in your first post by editing it? (Button at the bottom)

And while I'm here, let me review your cards

Imp Scout is too good and generic. It searches any DARK monster out there, and there are lots of really powerful DARK monsters. I'm sure someone can figure out a way to use it for an OTK or something. It might not be that bad but it's something I'd rather DARK monsters not have.

And the second card is also too generic, and people can probably figure out a way to abuse that too. Destroy it with their own spells to summon any DARK from your anywhere...

If you're going to make support for such a broad category like DARK, you need to limit the power of your cards. Or you can just make them all into an archetype and support that archetype.

 

OCG:

Imp Scout - When this card is Summoned: Add 1 DARK monster from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.

Demon Colossus - If this monster is destroyed by a Spell/Trap effect: Special Summon 1 DARK monster from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard.

Thanks for the ideas, also, those are the only 2 I've made so far. Once I make all of them I will post them.mor maybe I will post them in groups.

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I think I'm going to change Imp scout and Demon Colossus so I can summon fiend monsters rather than DARK.

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"Demon Colosus" has too much defense points without any restriction or cost....plus it can special summon high level dark monsters easily from the deck and ressurect them, forming a loop of sorts....