Big bang Demon's dragon

[JTH880]

ehhhh I didn't realized that effect gone... jesus... edit; no image because this forum is f****** mess...

 

Big Bang Demon’s Dragon

5000/3800

Demon[or dragon]/12 dark/synchro/union

1 red nova dragon + 2 or more tuners from field or grave banished from play [edited]

 

The original level of this monster when on the field is always treated as 13.

This card cannot be special summoned by other ways. When this monster is summoned, it’s summon cannot be negated, and until rest of this turn it’s unaffected by opponent cards effects. This monster gains additional attacks for every tuner removed from play to summon it. (it cannot attack directly more than 2 times-lol) Once per turn you can make it's attack 0 and change control to your opponent until end of your turn. Once per turn you can equip this card to one monster on your field and make it gains it's effect and when you do, both cards are banished during end phase. When this card leaves the field you can special summon "Red nova dragon" monster from extra deck, grave or banished ignoring it's summoning conditions. When this card is removed from field you must choose 13 cards ether from your deck or banished and send them to the graveyard, you can use this effects once per duel.

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btw. can you FINALLY ​give this damn cardmaker option to re-size text?!

 

WHY THIS FORUM IS MESS​ ?!?!?!?

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Complaining about the cardmaker isn't going to make YCMaker fix it any quicker.
It's set to resize after a certain amount of lines are written into the card; nothing we can do about it.
 
That's how it's been even before I came around in early 2009, which is a very long time.
 
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(This card's original Level is always treated as 13)
Must be Special Summoned by banishing 2 or more Tuner monsters you control or in your Graveyard and sending 1 "Red Dragon Archfiend" you control to the Graveyard while the combined Levels of those monsters equal 12, and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. You can only use the (7) effect of "Big Band Demon's Dragon" once per turn.

(1) This card's Special Summon cannot be negated.

(2) When this card is Special Summoned: Until the end of this turn, it is unaffected by your opponent's card effects.

(3) This monster can make additional attacks in a row for every banished Tuner Monster used to Special Summon it.

(4) Once per turn: You can make this card's ATK and DEF 0, and if you do, switch control of this card to your opponent.

(5) Once per turn: You can equip this card to 1 monster you control; it gains this card's effects. During the End Phase, if this effect was activated (and was not negated): Banish this card and the equipped monster.

(6) If this card leaves the field: You can Special Summon 1 "Red Nova Dragon" monster from your Graveyard, Extra Deck or currently banished, ignoring Summoning conditions.

(7) When this card leaves the field: Choose 13 cards from your Deck or currently banished cards, then send them to the Graveyard.

 

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Do you want to know why the cardmaker is rendering your text small? Because you have a wall of text for an effect.

Look at how your effect is structured.

 

You have 7+ effects on this card; is there really a need for that many?

 

Additionally, the way you worded the Summoning conditions is very awkward, so I rewrote it in a similar style to Ultimaya/Bishilbalkin.

 

There is no reason for a monster to require an original Level of 13 or higher.

Yes, there are monsters that can go over the standard Level 12 limit, but those are special cases. This is not one of them.

 

Also, why would you want to mill 13 of your own cards to the Graveyard?

 

To be honest, you really need to work on your OCG and card effects.

Cut it down to no more than three effects (not counting the summon conditions).

[JTH880]

you completely don't know the strategy and you trying fixing me... jesus

 

1. lvl13, change control, zero atk for things like rallis ect. ect.

2. 13 cards for red nova dragon boost or for other combos

3. 13 is unlucky number

 

and about effects, if they will be cut, then it will never unleash full potential of the cards, but I will in future think up how to put them together in better ways

 

also I think, that maybe it's effect should be about milling cards from your deck... but maybe current is better?

 

and maybe it should be removed from play anyway, but it's rather not this much powerful...only useful for sort of combos

 

but... actually when you are not archetype player you almost cannot protect self from newer decks so... it's the same op as them lol

[TF2_The_Scout]

So, this card can make itself leave the field and summon Red Nova Dragon when it does? It also has a low summoning condition in comparison. This thing is just blatantly overpowered and needs a nerf. Sure, Quasar can summon Shooting Star Dragon, but Shooting Star Dragon isn't that powerful in comparison. You're having this summon 1 hell of a control card with little effort. Does the union effect just give the equipped monster this card's effects along with its own or does it replace the effect?

 

Also, card text is small with long effects. That's just how it is. It's not the site's fault it doesn't cater to you personally.

[Fukato]

Why not separate the effects into different forms like Winged Dragon of Ra? If Winged Dragon of Ra had all of its effects into one card, it would result into the same massive wall of text too. This card can attack up to at least 3 times in one turn. That's actually a bit overpowered considering its ATK. I don't know why you would want to switch control of this card anyways unless you just want to attack into it for its least couple effects. That's punishing your opponent really bad, especially when you're going to get out Red Nova Dragon but then again it can always be Solemn Warninged or Solemn Noticed, but what's the chance they'll have that. It's definitely overpowered since it has a faster summoning condition than Red Nova Dragon (which is pretty much the same but better for its effect). The best suggestion I have is to either scrap some effects like the last effect (can't find any use forit but for it to try to come back into this card making it just wow...) or separating its effect. Unless you want Konami to create a Winged Dragon of Ra card with ALL OF ITS EFFECTS to show you a giant wall of text that you can't read.

[JTH880]

honestly it isn't wall of text, they actually can re-size text box for that

 

also maybe I should use at least nova required to summoning it...hmmm and also limit it to 2 direct attacks [lol]

 

for ra this is simple;

 

cannot be normal/special summoned from hand expect by tributing 3 monsters. cannot be set.

Cannot be target by cards effects. Control cannot be switch.This card cannot attack first turn it's normal summoned

• this card gains it's atk&def equal to original of tributed monsters
• when you normal summon it; once per turn you can pay 1000 lp to destroy one card on the field
• when it's special summoned from the grave it's treated as "God phoenix" & can wipe out opponent field in exchange of your life points until 1, in resolve to this effect it gains atk points from paid LP & returns to graveyard until end phase

lol

 

it's still epic that they made 3 different forms of ra lol

 

edit;

 

I edited :D now it requires little more effort xD

 

 

btw. you are all just stupid as f xD sorry but...

 

"wall of text you cannot read"

 

http://www.mawo-cards.com/artikel/702/Shooting-Quasar-Dragon_20588.jpg

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[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

If you don't like the cardmaker, you're more than welcome to find another generator.

Like I told you, it is programmed to automatically resize the text to a particular size after a certain point.

 

Even the TCGEditor does that, and people use that one more often.

 

While evilfusion and Night both have access to the cardmaker's functions, they aren't going to modify things to check that card text doesn't become small as hell.

 

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As for Shooting Quasar, it is readable despite being 6 lines (bear in mind that card is likely developed with Photoshop templates or something, where they HAVE control over the font size).

 

Yours is 9 lines (with the resizing in mind) and likely would be more if cardmaker didn't make the font small.

Shooting Quasar has 3 effects; yours still has at least 6-7.

 

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In any case, now the card is impossible to summon.

 

Red Nova itself is already a Level 12 (and requires setup), and even if we assume that making Level 13 and higher Synchros is permitted, that is only 1 Level for 2 Tuners (and you cannot have Level 0). It cannot be done, unless you use Level Eater or something. But by then, you'd be better off winning with Scar-Red anyway.