Ekan2077 Posted February 5, 2016 Report Share Posted February 5, 2016 Oye mamitas y papitos New bad card. OLD PALADIN OF THE SETTING SUN WARRIOR/SYNCHRO/EFFECT atk : 1400 def : 900 EFFECT : (comic sans (overused meme) incoming) [1 LIGHT Tuner + 1 Level 4 Warrior Non-Tuner Monster]Cannot be Special Summoned.When this card is Synchro Summoned,Send all LIGHT monsters on either player's field to the Graveyard.This card gains 500 ATK for every monster sent to the Graveyard by this effect,and when this card is destroyed by battle or a card effect and sent to the Graveyard,remove from play all the monsters sent to the Graveyard including this card,and you gain 200 LP from every monster sent to the Graveyard by this effect. NEW Lore : [1 LIGHT Tuner monster + 1 Level 4 Warrior Non-Tuner monster]Must be Synchro Summoned and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways.When this card is Synchro Summoned,send all LIGHT monsters to the Graveyard excluding this card : This card gain 300 ATK for every "Harbinger"monster sent to the Graveyard by this effect.If this card is destroyed by battle or a card effect and sent to the Graveyard,you can remove from play all monsters sent to the Graveyard by the first effect,and gain 200 LP from every Harbinger monster removed from play by this effect. ps : This is the failure of a first card on a doomed archetype. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted February 5, 2016 Report Share Posted February 5, 2016 If this card cannot be Special Summoned, then how exactly do you get this card out in the first place? Unless you mean that you can't Special Summon it outside of its proper Synchro Summon method. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ekan2077 Posted February 5, 2016 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2016 If this card cannot be Special Summoned, then how exactly do you get this card out in the first place? Unless you mean that you can't Special Summon it outside of its proper Synchro Summon method.Exactly.It can only be Synchro Summoned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted February 5, 2016 Report Share Posted February 5, 2016 If that is the case, then you'll need to change the first effect to say "Must be Synchro Summoned and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways"; otherwise, it will imply that you can't Special Summon this card at all. Also keep in mind that this card is also caught up in its own "send all LIGHT monsters to the Graveyard" thing on-summon; much like Black Rose is (though in its case, effect is optional whereas this isn't). Don't know if you intended for that, but otherwise the ATK gain makes no sense if it's going to kill itself upon summoning. (I'll review this in more depth in an hour when I'm on break) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ekan2077 Posted February 5, 2016 Author Report Share Posted February 5, 2016 (I'll review this in more depth in an hour when I'm on break)In that time,I'll do some improvement Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted February 5, 2016 Report Share Posted February 5, 2016 Paladin 1 LIGHT Tuner monster + 1 Level 4 non-Tuner Warrior-Type monsterMust be Synchro Summoned and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways.(1) When this card is Synchro Summoned: Send all LIGHT monsters on the field to the Graveyard, then this card gains 500 ATK for every monster sent by this effect.(2) When this card is destroyed (by battle or a card effect) and sent to the Graveyard: Banish all the monsters sent to the Graveyard by this card's (1) effect, including this card, and when you do, gain 200 LP for every monster banished by this effect. Vuthyr 1 LIGHT Tuner monster + 1 Level 4 non-Tuner Warrior-Type monsterMust be Synchro Summoned and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways.(1) When this card is Synchro Summoned: Send all LIGHT monsters (from where) to the Graveyard, except this card; this card gains 300 ATK for every "Harbinger" monster sent to the Graveyard by this effect.(2) If this card is destroyed (by battle or card effect) and sent to the Graveyard: You can banish all monsters sent to the Graveyard by this card's (1) effect, and if you do, gain 200 LP for every "Harbinger" monster banished by this effect. ----As I mentioned earlier about Paladin, it nukes itself when summoned so there is no point in getting its ATK boosted. If you had it excluded from said effect, then it'd work properly. Then again, you can't assume that the opponent will have LIGHT monsters for you to get rid of on the field and a lot of the time, it may end up with just your field getting wiped. Vuthyr needs to mention WHERE the monsters are being sent from; it's vague at this point. Much like with Paladin, still anti-LIGHT. I am going to assume that these Harbinger monsters are LIGHT Warriors, because at present, I really do not see a Deck that can feasibly use this; especially because the materials are pretty much specific (Level 4 LIGHT Tuner and some Level 4 Warrior of your choice) and in terms of LIGHT Tuners, majority of them either can't be used or have bad synergy with whatever Deck you try to fit them in. Also, moved to Multiple Cards since you added another one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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