Madolche Support pls

[Snatch Steal]

Tiaramisu is still best waifu

 

Madolche Barkscotti

Rank 3 EARTH

Beast / Xyz / Effect

2 Level 3 "Madolche" monsters

Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz material from this card; Special Summon 1 "Madolche" monster from your hand or deck, then you can activate one of the following effects:

• All "Madolche" effect monsters you control become level 3
• All "Madolche" effect monsters you control become level 4
• All "Madolche" effect monsters you control become level 5

When a card’s effect is activated: You can tribute 1 "Madolche" monster you control; negate the activation, and if you do, destroy that card. There must be a face-up Fairy-Type "Madolche" monster on your side of the field to activate and resolve this effect. 

ATK 2000 / DEF 1700

 

Madolche Squeclair

Level 3 EARTH

When this card is activated: you can add 1 "Madolche" Spell/Trap card from your deck to your hand. Your opponent cannot target "Madolche" cards you control with card effects.

<2><2>

Beast / Pendulum / Effect

If you control a "Madolche" Monster: You can Special Summon this card from your hand. You cannot Special Summon other monsters the turn you activate this effect, except EARTH monsters. 

ATK 300 / DEF 1600

 

Madolche Dukanoli

Level 4 EARTH

"Madolche" Xyz monsters you control gain 300 ATK and DEF. "Madolche" Monsters you control cannot be destroyed by card effects.

<5><5>

Warrior / Pendulum / Effect

While there are no monsters in your graveyard: You can Normal Summon 1 “Madolche” monster in addition to your Normal Summon/Set.

ATK 1700 / DEF 1500

[Woloa]

Uhm... Madolche don't run or support pens. Also, making them immune to card effects prevents, or at least hinders, several of the cards the archetype already has. Not to mention that it is kinda a powerful ability to place on a low level monster, though, I can't really tell if the pen effect of the monster effect is listed first due to your strange formating, it's normally:
Name:
Level/Type/Atrtribute

Attack/Defense

Monster effect

<Scale one> <Scale 2>

Pendulum effect.

[Snatch Steal]

Uhm... Madolche don't run or support pens.

Superheavy Samurai don't run or support pends. Neither do Bujin. Nor deskbot. But they have pends.

 

Also, making them immune to card effects prevents, or at least hinders, several of the cards the archetype already has.

Such as...what, exactly? I can't think of anything off the top of my head. Except Chateau, but it doesn't target. Also, they're not immune. Ignister still works.

 

Not to mention that it is kinda a powerful ability to place on a low level monster, though, I can't really tell if the pen effect of the monster effect is listed first due to your strange formating, it's normally:

Name:

Level/Type/Atrtribute

Attack/Defense

Monster effect

<Scale one> <Scale 2>

Pendulum effect.

 

 

Uh, I formatted it the way it's printed on a Yugioh card. I don't know anyone who formats it that way. How is the way a yugioh card is printed...weird?

Yeah, I literally see nothing wrong with the way I printed it. Sorry.

 

Thanks for your "input," I guess.