Jaden Hero's retrain E-Hero Steam Fighter

[Dragonman82]

E-Hero Steam Fighter

Level 5/ Water/ Warrior/ Fusion

1800 Att/ 1000 def

Water Att E-Hero + Fire Att E-Hero

Wen this card battles a monster: you may have the opponents monster lose 1000 att; but this card will deal no battle damage.  When this card destroys a monster by battle you gain life points equal to its original att points.  

 

Well I always thought that Steam Healer was the weakest of all the fusions, it was simply too weak to use its ability. Hopefully this makes it worth using.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

1 WATER "Elemental HERO" monster + 1 FIRE "Elemental HERO" monster
If this card attacks a monster: You can have the opponent's monster lose 1000 ATK, but your opponent takes no battle damage from that battle. When this card destroys a monster by battle: Gain LP equal to that monster's original ATK.

 

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You should learn how to write effects properly, as it makes it easier for members to read your stuff. 

 

Anyway, while this is less restrictive than the original Steam Healer, only viable FIRE Elemental HERO at present is Blazeman and WATER has Bubbleman. Don't know if I mentioned this in one of your other threads, but unless you get those two monsters in hand or elsewhere, you really don't have much options for making this. Granted, being able to run over

 

Maybe if we get more HEROs of these Attributes that are worth using, this will see more play. At present, it's a step up but with the current card pool, not too many ways of making this. 

 

(Obviously you can use the original materials or the retrains you made some time ago)

[Dragonman82]

1 WATER "Elemental HERO" monster + 1 FIRE "Elemental HERO" monster

If this card attacks a monster: You can have the opponent's monster lose 1000 ATK, but your opponent takes no battle damage from that battle. When this card destroys a monster by battle: Gain LP equal to that monster's original ATK.

 

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You should learn how to write effects properly, as it makes it easier for members to read your stuff. 

 

Anyway, while this is less restrictive than the original Steam Healer, only viable FIRE Elemental HERO at present is Blazeman and WATER has Bubbleman. Don't know if I mentioned this in one of your other threads, but unless you get those two monsters in hand or elsewhere, you really don't have much options for making this. Granted, being able to run over < 2800 ATK monsters is pretty nice, coupled with LP restoration. 

 

Maybe if we get more HEROs of these Attributes that are worth using, this will see more play. At present, it's a step up but with the current card pool, not too many ways of making this. 

 

(Obviously you can use the original materials or the retrains you made some time ago)

 

I regret that grammar is not my strong suit, but thank you for your feedback.  I do plan on creating on a big list of all my hero cards when I finally get some more fusions out.  It's just so hard to think of an upgraded Flame Wingman.

 

Also is there somewhere that could help me write the card effects?

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

There's an OCG thread at the top of this forum; hopefully you've seen it when you come in here. 

Or you can ask me for help with your card grammar if you need it.