The Final Horseman (Xyz)

[IamFallen]

                           

 

The Final Horseman

 

DARK Rank 5

 

2 Level 5 monsters

When this card declares a direct attack: You can detach 2 Xyz Material; This card gains 2500 ATK, and your opponent cannot activate card effects until the end of the Damage Step. During the end of the Battle Phase you used this card's effect; Banish this card, and take damage equal to this monster's DEF.

 

Please tell me what you guys think!

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

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[IamFallen]

Well it's showing up on my end, and I already included the written text, but I will try to fix it.

Should be fine now.

[_Wulf_]

I can't really review if there no ATK and DEF. :P

 

But until that,

 

You cant have a monster gain 2500 ATK right out of the gate like that and your opponent is left defense less and just with one effect.

 

First - I know that it takes 2 level 5 monster, but you can't have it gain 2500 ATK and take your opponents defenses out.

 

Second - its not a cost use : not ;.(Using a ; means there is a up coming cost.)

 

Third - I know your also using 2 Xyz materials but still like 'First' you can't do that kind of eff unless it takes like 2 level 8 monsters and it's still pushing it and if you gain 2500 ATK you can't have a second effect in there as well.

 

Four - The banish still doesn't even it out. You still have a Rank 5 monster that has around 4500 ATK and your opponent can't stop you.

 

Five - When you take damage around 2000 - 1500 and the banish just makes it not worth it you just wasted to level 5 monster for it to maybe be banished the next turn.

 

Ok I'll re-word a bit

 

 

2 Level 5 monsters

When this card declares a attack: You can detach 1 Xyz Material; This card gains 1000 ATK until the end of the damage step. During the end of the Battle Phase you used this card's effect; Take damage equal to half this monster's DEF.

Well this is the best I can re-word. I can't really see this card making it in to my deck but I might make it into someone else's. :)

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

That, and no Type; I can't really grade this properly unless everything is there. (I don't know why YugiCo isn't showing images on our end, but yeah. You're better off using our cardmaker, albeit there are some issues with it at present). 

 

If it starts with low ATK, then you could PROBABLY get away with letting it gain that much strength at once, although it's basically a one-shot attack (and pretty much to end the game). Otherwise, if it has normal stats for a Rank 5, then yeah you'll need to lower it, considering it has an Armades effect on it.