Guest JoshIcy Posted April 13, 2008 Report Share Posted April 13, 2008 [align=center]Again, my ocg may be a bit off but this is a type of effect i've never truly written before. When i was looking for images, i wanted to create something that involved Aqua-Type monsters because ive always enjoyed the fact that they have some kind of offensive power yet heal. The original card was rather unbalanced, so in order to balance i added a Spell Speed effect... lets hope thats all it needed lol ^_^ The effect of this card is not considered part of a Chain. Your opponent may negate the effect of this card by discarding 1 card from their hand. When a player activates a Normal Spell or Normal Trap Card, select 1 Fish or Aqua-Type monster from your Graveyard and Special Summon 1 "Aqua Tear Token", (Aqua-Type/WATER/Level 7/ATK ?/DEF ?), the ATK and DEF of the token are equal to the ATK and DEF of the selected monster minus 500 points. If the ATK of the token exceeds 2000, Tribute 1 monster you control during each of your Standby Phases as long as it remains face-up on the field, (this is not optional). If the token is removed from the field by the effect of a Spell or Trap Card, increase your Life Points equal to the 2nd digit in the cards ATK x 200. Photobucket Credithttp://photobucket.com/mediadetail/?media=http%3A%2F%2Fi184.photobucket.com%2Falbums%2Fx90%2FWhite_Mage_0610%2FMegaman%2520NT%2520Warrior%2FEnzan___Prince_of_Ice_by_IjuinEnzan.jpg&searchTerm=ice%20warrior&pageOffset=13 Holo Credit72night Ruling-For the last part of the effect its like this when determining the amount you gain: 1400 < the bolded number is the second digit, multiply that number by 200 when determining how much lp you gain. Any edits on this card will not appear directly on the card, the effect is squeezed too much to notice.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Ingo Posted April 13, 2008 Report Share Posted April 13, 2008 Nice card Icy, :D I like it 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted April 13, 2008 Report Share Posted April 13, 2008 thanks lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted April 13, 2008 Report Share Posted April 13, 2008 Wow, it's definitely an interesting card, and very nice at that! I like the part about the second digit, it adds a little twist in there :D I think it should be "the ATK and DEF of the token are equal to" not "is equal to", but other than that I didn't see any errors. overall - 13.62/13.69 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted April 13, 2008 Report Share Posted April 13, 2008 Wow' date=' it's definitely an interesting card, and very nice at that! I like the part about the second digit, it adds a little twist in there :D I think it should be "the ATK and DEF of the token are equal to" not "is equal to", but other than that I didn't see any errors. overall - 13.62/13.69 ^_^[/quote'] thanks lol, and i dont think ive received less than a 13.0 from you in awhile XD.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted April 13, 2008 Report Share Posted April 13, 2008 Wow' date=' it's definitely an interesting card, and very nice at that! I like the part about the second digit, it adds a little twist in there :D I think it should be "the ATK and DEF of the token are equal to" not "is equal to", but other than that I didn't see any errors. overall - 13.62/13.69 ^_^[/quote']Q4E, nothing else to really say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted April 13, 2008 Report Share Posted April 13, 2008 thanks lol' date=' and i dont think ive received less than a 13.0 from you in awhile XD....[/quote']Well, I like your cards, so how could I rate them any lower? ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted April 13, 2008 Report Share Posted April 13, 2008 ^_^ thanks for the comments, and you too browarod Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexander² Posted April 13, 2008 Report Share Posted April 13, 2008 I like the Idea very much, Cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SephirothKirby Posted April 13, 2008 Report Share Posted April 13, 2008 Not bad. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RiffMaster Alex Posted April 13, 2008 Report Share Posted April 13, 2008 Very well done! But I do think the OCG is slightly off...Cool holo too! 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted April 13, 2008 Report Share Posted April 13, 2008 Very well done! But I do think the OCG is slightly off...Cool holo too! 8/10 yeah, kinda hard effect >.>.... and some menial errors that i seem to always get wrong... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted April 15, 2008 Report Share Posted April 15, 2008 bumps? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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