Cardtrick Magican, REMAKE(WRITTEN)

[The Frost King]

 

Cardtrick Magican/Rank:4/Atturibute:Dark/Type: Spellcaster,Xyz/ Effect: This card can not be targeted by card effects. Oncer per turn:during your Main Phase,you can draw 1 card and then activate 1 of these effects:

(1):If the card drawn is a monster, you can Special Summon it.

(2): If the card drawn is a Spell card, you gain 800 LP.

(3): If the card drawn is a Trap card, you can target 1 card on the field, destroy it. 

Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: target up to 2 cards in your graveyard, add them to your hand.

 

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This is the Written remake version.

 

Cardtrick Magican

Rank:4

Atturibute:Dark

Type: Spellcaster/Xyz/Effect

Summoning Conditions: 2 level 4 Spellcaster-type monsters

Effect: Once per turn: during your Main Phase, you can discard 2 cards and if you do, draw 1 card then activate 1 of these effects: 

(1): If the card drawn is a monster, you can Special Summon it.

(2): If the card drawn is a Spell card, you can target 1 card on your opponents side of the field, destroy it

(3): If the card drawn is a Trap card, target 1 card on your side of the field, destroy it.

Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: target up to 2 cards in your graveyard, add them to your hand.

 

 

 

 

[Thepopon8r]

A generic rank 4 with decent stats that lets you draw a card for no cost? Purely on that it's pretty op. The effects it activates based on the card drawn range from below average to overpowered, the detach effect is pretty okay, and the fact that it cant be targeted makes the card WAY too overpowered.

 

You really need to add some kind of cost to the card drawing, or make it less generic, at least.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

If this card were of a Rank that required sizable effort to bring out in the first place, or less generic, you could probably get away with the targeting immunity. But yeah, this is a generic Rank 4 that nearly every Deck that is able to R4 can/will make, coupled with really good stats. 

 

The detach effect is fine, but the rest of them do range from meh to going over the line. Spell is iffy, Trap is common destruction (which has mixed results given on what runs this; taking into account current Rank 4, the backrow tends to be kinda average/high), Monster triggers things including on-summon effects and search power. At a minimum, it's a free draw card that doesn't cost you a detach. 

 

I'll leave some options you can try:

• Make the first effect require a detach, and definitely put a hard OPT on it. (You can't trigger multiple copies per turn). Lower its ATK. 
• Make this a 3-mat monster and require a detach on the first monster. (Stuff like 'tellars and HEROs can still abuse it though, but that much can't be helped)
• Remove the free card draw, and change it to something else. Stats should be lowered.

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I understand this is your first post, but as it stands, card does too much for a generic Rank 4 (there's little reason NOT to run it, but it's simply too powerful).

[The Frost King]

I have now updated the card and made it less OP

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[The Frost King]

Bump