Sasuke Samurai 6 Posted September 1, 2016 Report Share Posted September 1, 2016 Normal Spell CardTarget 1 monster you control; change it to defense position, then it loses 2000 DEF. After that, draw 2 cards. For the rest of this turn, you cannot draw other cards after activating this card. You can only activate 1 "Pot of Pleasure" per turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted September 1, 2016 Report Share Posted September 1, 2016 You don't need the "you can only activate 1 "Pot of Pleasure per turn" clause. Your first one activated will make it so that you cannot draw anything with the other ones.Also, I advice you make it so that it can only target monsters with 2000 or more DEF for it, otherwise it doesn't matter if your monster had 3000 or 100, as long as it performs the action of lowering whatever it has, it'll do it by up to that amount and give you the draws. It'd look something like this:Target 1 Attack Position monster you control with 2000 or more DEF: Change it to Defense Position and have it lose 2000 DEF, and if it does, draw 2 cards. You cannot draw a card(s) for the rest of the turn. I think even after that, it is a little bit too generic, considering how easy big Level 7+ monsters are to drop to the field and how the target can just become a Material/Tribute for something else right away. Plus, its restriction is "for the rest of the turn" so as long as your other draw effects happen before this, you can still go nuts. This card is essentially a Pot of Greed, and looking at how Pot of Desires banishes 1/4 of people's decks face-down and it is still an expensive staple, I believe your card definitely needs further drawbacks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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