[Written] El Shaddoll Linyn

[Lystern]

Level 11 Fairy-Type DARK Fusion Monster  

1 "El-Shaddoll" Fusion monster + 1 Level 9 or higher non-DARK Fusion monster on the field

ATK 3500

DEF 3500

Must first be Special Summoned by above Fusion materials. Cannot be targeted by, or be destroyed by card effects. Your opponent cannot activate cards or effects in response to Flip Summon and effect of "Shaddoll" monster you control. Once per turn; You can banish 1 "Shaddoll" monster from your Graveyard, this card gains banished cards half of ATK until the End Phase. If this card leaves the field: You can Special Summon 1 banished "Shaddoll" monster. 

[Caláin]

You should add the type, attribute, monster kind* and level.

Apart from that, the card is pretty powerful, but that's propably intended, given the high fusion cost. Nevertheless, an effect like not being affected by any effects is always controversal, even alone, but here there are actually multiple other effects following. I don't want to say that the first effect is definitely OP, but it comes close (i'm not sure, given the high summoning costs). About the level of the second material, I'm not sure if there's actually that much difference in the end, I like the thought of level 9 best. However, I don't know that much about Shaddolls, so there is a considerable chance that I missed something important.

 

 

*from the description it becomes pretty obvious that it is a fusion monster, but anyway

[Lystern]

I updated the effects and other informations.